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Roommates (loli) Anonymous 12/10/06(Sat)11:32 No. 17319 ID: 5c8966

It all started when I was 19, in my first semester at college. I'd moved away from home and into my first apartment, and got my first roommate as well. He was a year younger than me, but unlike me he hadn't spent a year after graduating highschool saving up his money for tuition and rent. His parents died in an avalanche at a ski resort, and between their considerable savings and the payout from the life insurance, he could afford college and not have to work for years. I hadn't known it when I met him at orientation and we decided to share an apartment, but he also had custody of his 11 year old sister.

The apartment was big, and nicer than I could have ever afforded on my own, so all three of us had separate bedrooms (hers was supposed to be a laundry room or something originally.). I also discovered my roommate was a bit of a dick who neglected his little sister.

I don't think it was intentional, more a result of losing his parents and having to adjust his plans for the future to revolve around caring for his sibling, and he probably wasn't ready for that sort of responsibility. But unless he needed to give her a ride or buy her something she needed, he basically didn't interact with her. He also barely did anything with me; maybe once a week he'd play video games with me, but he spent nearly all his time in class or shut in his room studying.

His little sister was cute, with her blue eyes, freckles, and short, light brown hair, but obviously way too young for me. She didn't play with dolls or anything, so I guess she was mature for her age, but she also spent all her time shut in her room when she wasn't at school. And I don't think she had any friends at her new school either.

After a month or so with my new roommates, we'd settled into a routine. If they weren't exactly friendly, they weren't bad either; quiet, clean, and they were the only way I could afford a really nice apartment just a block from campus.

I wish I'd known then what I know now. It'd have saved me a lot of grief.


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Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)01:12 No. 25238 ID: 0deb37

Wow, a week after a new post and still no replies?! What's going on?


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The+Bard 17/12/20(Wed)01:48 No. 25239 ID: 67e40d

>>25238
It's family invasion holiday portion of the year. That is my guess.


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Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)03:30 No. 25240 ID: c47e15

>>25238

People check on this less often now


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Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)04:23 No. 25241 ID: 73d817

>>25225
Keep on going bro, you still got rapt attention here


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/12/22(Fri)03:58 No. 25246 ID: c15c05

>>25241

Next update will be between Christmas and New Year's. Look forward to it.


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The+Bard 17/12/23(Sat)03:25 No. 25248 ID: 69067c

>>25246
Oh, I very much do. I can't stop reading this story.


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Anonymous 17/12/31(Sun)13:39 No. 25267 ID: 0cf92e

>>25246
STRAYA HERE
YOU GOT 14 MINUTES TO POST AN UPDATE OR YOU'RE A NIGGER


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Anonymous 17/12/31(Sun)21:30 No. 25268 ID: d0c7fc

This story made me get into working out tbh


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Anonymous 18/01/02(Tue)00:08 No. 25270 ID: ff5142

>>25267
He is a nigger


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Anonymous 18/01/02(Tue)15:20 No. 25271 ID: ed7a8b

to be fair, he didn't say which christmas and new year's.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 18/01/03(Wed)06:56 No. 25273 ID: c93939

>>25271

Orthodox churches use the Julian calendar for holidays such as Christmas and New Year's. According to the Julian calendar, it is currently December 21st.


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Gragnost 18/01/07(Sun)01:35 No. 25282 ID: 551d98

Yeah yeah. Either way we want the promised next part.


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Anonymous 18/01/07(Sun)07:21 No. 25283 ID: e1cdb2

>>25273
Taps fingers...

Well?


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The+Bard 18/01/08(Mon)02:09 No. 25285 ID: c14470

>>25273
Please sir, may I have some more? -Oliver Twist, with an empty bowl and big-sad-orphan-boy eyes.

Just kidding. Take your time. Late and good beats early and suck every time.


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Anonymous 18/01/16(Tue)05:06 No. 25297 ID: e72d92

I need more, p-please.


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Anonymous 18/01/22(Mon)04:16 No. 25310 ID: 9d56f7

still waiting...


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 18/01/22(Mon)23:27 No. 25311 ID: f06efb

Got my ass knocked down by the flu, still getting over it. Gonna make the next chapter a special one to make up for the delay. It'll go up once I'm feeling better and I'm not hallucinating from all the fucking Nyquil.


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The+Bard 18/01/23(Tue)04:25 No. 25312 ID: 8ab234

>>25311

Given how this flu is going it is good that you are still alive. I am hoping to dodge it myself. Good to know you are ok.


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Anonymous 18/01/23(Tue)14:32 No. 25313 ID: 0cf92e

>>25311
Protip: get some antibiotics, you have a chest infection.


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Anonymous 18/01/26(Fri)06:00 No. 25318 ID: 4bf957

Holy fuck, this thing is still going?


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Anonymous 18/02/06(Tue)00:40 No. 25342 ID: 5b50a8

bump


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Anonymous 18/02/07(Wed)00:10 No. 25346 ID: c9d098

So I'm the only one that got the gorram comment. River Tam and Kaylee Frye. Yep. Oh and reavers too.
Thanks I read through this in a couple of days. Outstanding story. Ill be back.


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Anonymous 18/02/22(Thu)11:46 No. 25394 ID: d6eb35

Update when? Come on OP.


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Anonymous 18/03/04(Sun)21:31 No. 25428 ID: a557d6

>>25225
Gotta give her her daily vitamins


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The+Bard 18/03/05(Mon)02:06 No. 25429 ID: 8fc537

*plays the speed up song on the mandolin to inspire OP*


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OP!T1tXaJv9os 18/03/05(Mon)04:16 No. 25430 ID: f79294

Sorry, hard drive shat the bed and I had to get a whole new computer.

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Saturday began when I stumbled out of bed to shit, shower, and shave (in that order), then wandered into the kitchen for breakfast, not bothering with clothing. Sara wandered out shortly after me, yawning and scratching her butt, clad in the usual nightshirt and pink panties. I immediately spotted something unusual and blurted out, "You changed your hair."

"Yep. It kept getting in my face."

She'd pulled her hair back into a pair of pigtails, which changed her appearance more than I would have expected. Still...

"Looks good, kiddo."

"Thanks. Breakfast?"

I set a plate with toast and scrambled eggs in front of her as she flopped bonelessly into the chair and began to nibble her breakfast. She gently whacked my shins with her toes as we ate in silence, then I grabbed both our dishes and put them in the sink. Sara seemed to notice my nudity only just then, and with a mischievous grin she shucked off her shirt and panties so we were both in matching birthday suits.

"Whatcha wanna do today, kiddo?"

"Hmm... Boyfriend-girlfriend stuff!"

"Getting an early start, huh," I chuckled, feeling myself rise to the occasion. She giggled, and I took her by the hand and led her to my room, where we both hopped in bed.

I settled her in my lap and she spread her legs for me, and I began rubbing her smooth little slit. She looked over her shoulder at me with a blissful smile, and I leaned down to give her a peck on the lips. She settled back against me, smiling, and closed her eyes, enjoying the sensation. I had her perfect, total trust.

Which I, of course, abused shamelessly. I'd brought her to orgasm enough times to get a rough idea of how long it took and what signs she gave that she was close, so I concentrated on identifying those signs. Before long she was breathing heavily and had moistened up noticeably, and I increased the intensity of my petting, focusing on the area around her little clit. When her breathing turned into panting, her face flushed as red as her crotch, and she began to scrunch her toes and clench her fists... I eased off. I moved the focus of my rubbing to her lips and slowed down. Her breathing gradually slowed, and I began to pick up the pace again. As I felt her nearing climax a second time, I eased off again, prolonging it. She crinkled her forehead in what was possibly frustration, but I don't think she realized I was deliberately bringing her to the edge and then backing off before she tipped over. All she knew was that she was close, but no fireworks yet.

By the third time I'd brought her to the brink and backed off, my hand was starting to get slick with her juices and she was definitely feeling the effects. She was so close, and yet it hadn't happened yet; she NEEDED to orgasm, and she needed it bad.

Which was when, without feeling an ounce of guilt, I made the big move in my master plan and whispered into her ear, "You wanna try sex again?"

She opened her eyes and pondered the question while I continued gently rubbing up and down her hairless slit, then replied, "Is it gonna hurt like last time?"

"Not as bad. You might be a little sore, but it won't hurt as much as your first time."

She thought about it some more, and I offered more words of encouragement.

"Plus, we can try a different position; that might be more comfortable for you."

"..... ok."

"That's my girl. You're no chicken, are you."

"Nuh-uh."

"Ok. Get on your hands and knees."

"Like in the caveman movie?"

"Yup; just like that. Remember when we practiced in the tent?"

Sara rolled off of me and got to her hands and knees on the bed, while I sat up and positioned myself behind her. Straddling my legs on either side of hers, I held her waist with one hand and guided my penis to her slit with the other.

"Ok sweetie, I'm gonna go slow like last time, ok? I'm only gonna go in a little at a time. If it hurts too much or you want to stop, just say so, ok?"

"Ok," she said, a slight tremor in her voice. Her face and crotch were still flushed a bright pink.

I gently pressed the head of my penis to her slit and felt her pillowy soft lips part before it; a little rubbing up and down located the hottest, moistest part and I pushed forward, inserting the head into her vagina. It was so tight it felt like she was trying to pinch the tip off my dick. I began a slow, easy back-and-forth motion, not pulling it out, just moving it. When she seemed ok with that, I began to press forward, pushing deeper. I felt her tense up and she sucked in air between her teeth with a hiss.

"You ok, kiddo?"

She nodded, but didn't say anything. I continued the gentle back-and-forth movement, concentrating on not hurting her, and gradually thrust my way deeper and deeper inside her. After several minutes, I felt the head of my dick press up against something, and my crotch was mashed up against hers. I was completely inside her.

"How you doin', Sara?"

"Uh-huh."

"... what?"

"I'm ok."

"All right. Here we go then."

She tensed up again, so I waited a little bit until she relaxed slightly, then began to slowly, gently, thrust in and out of her a little at a time. Holy crap, it felt amazing. She'd gotten pretty good at blowjobs, but actually putting your penis inside a girl was way better. It was hot, wet, tight, squishy... honestly, there's no way to really describe it that doesn't make it sound kinda gross. You just have to experience it. If you've never tried it yourself, I definitely recommend it. 10 out of 10, would penetrate again.

Both hands on her hips to help her hold steady, I gently thrust in and out of Sara at a steady pace. Before long, she was breathing heavily again and clenching the sheets in her hands. My plan seemed to be working: her first time, she'd focused on being scared and how much it hurt. This time, Sara seemed to be enjoying my dick as much as she liked the heavy petting. I picked up the pace a little and she squirmed underneath me to keep herself upright, but made no protest. I took that as a sign to go even faster and began pumping my hips; Sara rocked back and forth in time to my thrusts, pigtails bouncing on either side of her head, panting and making little squeaks. I could actually feel my balls slap against her pussy as I fucked her.

"You ok?"

She just gasped for air, but eventually nodded vigorously. Then she suddenly tensed up, clenching the sheets so tight that her knuckles turned white, and buried her face into the pillow as she let out an odd sound somewhere between a moan and a squeak. At the same time, her vagina seemed to ripple down the length of my cock and squeeze it to the point that for a second, it was honestly difficult for me to pull out of her for the next thrust. She raised her head again, gasping for air, and seemed to suddenly go limp, and I realized I'd just felt her orgasm from the inside.

Just the thought of that instantly made my dick harder, and only a few thrusts later I felt myself tense up, my balls tingle, and I hilted myself in her crotch and fired my load as deep into her as I could. I hadn't pent it up like last time, but it still seemed to go on forever. Honestly, by the time I was finished, my balls were sore, like they were about to implode. Sara went limp, and my hands on her waist were the only thing keeping her top-down, bottom-up, as I caught my breath and waited for my erection to die down. Any excuse to stay inside of her for as long as possible.

All good things must come to an end eventually, however, and I pulled my now flaccid penis out of her with a barely audible, but definitely wet-sounding, noise. A bit of my cum slowly oozed out of her and down the length of her slit, and I patted her rear with possessive pride. I collapsed onto the bed beside her and she flopped sideways on top of me, still blushing and gasping for breath.

"How was that, kiddo? Better?"

She nodded, then replied, "uh-huh," breathlessly. I gently felt one of her little boobs with my hand, then reached up to take her by the chin and tilt her head so I could give her another kiss on the lips.

"Did it hurt?"

"Not as much. It's sore again. But it felt good."

"Yeah?"

"Really good."

"I'm glad. I like it when I can make you feel good."

"Me too."

I snorted at her comment and she giggled, snuggling up against me.

"So you think you wanna try sex again in the future?"

"Can we do it that way again?"

"Sure. We can do it however you want."

"I love you," she said dreamily as she rolled over on top of me and put her arms around me.

"I love you too, kiddo," I said, holding my little girlfriend to me. I closed my eyes and felt myself slowly drifting off to sleep; a nap sounded good right about now.

"How come in Dinosaur Planet all the muscley people wanted to eat meat and take over?"

"... what?"


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Anonymous 18/03/05(Mon)20:37 No. 25431 ID: 6d0371

Damn you OP, you make me cum like no other. Especially the part with the balls slap <3


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The+Bard 18/03/06(Tue)05:18 No. 25432 ID: 8fc537

>>25430
*Looks at the mandolin in disbelief*
It... It worked?


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Anonymous 18/03/06(Tue)06:38 No. 25433 ID: 8e2488

>>25430
She better be pregnant


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Anonymous 18/03/07(Wed)03:30 No. 25436 ID: d1edc9

You are a god, OP... No matter the delays, the waiting, whatever happens... You are number one


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Anonymous 18/03/10(Sat)15:04 No. 25444 ID: 06eb22

>>25430
10 out of 10... would penetrate again...

Had me rolling...


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Anonymous 18/03/22(Thu)23:36 No. 25467 ID: a557d6

>>25430
Back to her vitamins while she's sore.


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Anonymous 18/03/29(Thu)14:25 No. 25477 ID: 6d0371

Are they ever going to try ass, too? I'm so excited :D


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Anonymous 18/04/13(Fri)20:07 No. 25506 ID: 6d0371

Bump.

Not sure if you have to bump on 7chan to avoid 404, just making sure.


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Anonymous 18/04/20(Fri)14:34 No. 25514 ID: 93166e

>>25506
It's a low-traffic website.Some threads here are five years old


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OP!T1tXaJv9os 18/04/20(Fri)23:41 No. 25515 ID: c34b76

>>25514

THIS thread is six years old. It'll disappear eventually without bumps, but leaving the front page isn't the end of the world.


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Anonymous 18/04/21(Sat)08:14 No. 25517 ID: 56b278

>>25515
Hey OP, you doing all right?


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Anonymous 18/04/26(Thu)00:22 No. 25524 ID: c34b76

>>25517

Yes, just busy. Remember, I write whenever the mood strikes me and I'm not super busy, hence why there's long stretches of nothing.

I'm working on more, but I'm not going to rush it.


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Anonymous 18/04/27(Fri)09:37 No. 25526 ID: 56b278

>>25524
I get ya, I've been keeping up with this story from the beginning, or damn near, so I'm used to it. More of a general are you in good health, how's life treating you, that sort of shit.


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The+Bard 18/05/03(Thu)02:44 No. 25528 ID: ff7502

>>25524

At least your stuff comes out more often than the Song of Ice and Fire books.


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Anonymous 18/05/05(Sat)15:12 No. 25531 ID: 4a7dea

>>25524
Just a quick question. Is there any reason you stopped updating the Damocles ASSTR page?


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Anonymous 18/05/14(Mon)04:20 No. 25542 ID: c34b76

>>25531

I was never updating it in the first place. Read through this thread, someone was doing it on my behalf.


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Anonymous 18/05/28(Mon)12:58 No. 25564 ID: 6d0371

bump <3


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Steven R. Overton 18/05/30(Wed)04:06 No. 25569 ID: f7d3f6

I came to Elit in search of a compatible place to share my (abridged) memoirs, now getting a final polish and being posted in an adjacent thread. While browsing the different stories to take the temperature of this place (and finding it well suited to my tastes), I was drawn into OP’s story and have now joined the many unfortunate souls chained to our computers, ever anticipating the return of our own m'sieur Godot.

I can only beg his legion of other fans to take my word for it that I had my own narrative completely typed out, with the exception of a few details, when I encountered this story, and all similarities (and I see there are many) are completely coincidental. This in itself lends OP’s story a ring of authenticity for me, despite his (quite proper) disclaimer that it is purely a work of fiction.

From my own experience and exchanging notes with many others with similar histories, both as the older and younger partners in the relationships, I sense a very familiar pattern, especially in the growing emotional connection between the parties. These affairs often begin (relatively) innocently, develop organically and graduate to deep emotional and spiritual bonds, at least for the younger partner, who necessarily has a smaller well of emotional experience to draw from. I could go on and on, but I’m (mercifully) shutting up.

TL, DR: New reader; totally hooked!


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Anonymous 18/05/31(Thu)14:25 No. 25582 ID: 5cab3d

>>25569
Welcome aboard mate. Enjoy the wait lol.


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OP!T1tXaJv9os 18/06/11(Mon)00:58 No. 25599 ID: 2f48ee

>>25569

>references Waiting For Godot

I see you're a man of taste as well.

I'm working on the next update, but the creative juices aren't flowing, so it's slow going. It'll come. Like all good things, it'll be worth the wait.


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SRO 18/06/12(Tue)06:55 No. 25602 ID: f7d3f6

>>25599
That's fine, OP, don't try to run ahead of the muse. We'll be here.


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Anonymous 18/06/13(Wed)22:49 No. 25607 ID: 8eaae7

You probably don't need it OP, but I'll be happy to come up with ideas and stuff. Though I understand if you would feel it wouldn't be your own work anymore too


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Anonymous 18/07/08(Sun)07:06 No. 25690 ID: 6d0371

summer bump of love <3


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Anonymous 18/07/12(Thu)00:52 No. 25698 ID: 9f007d

>>25690
Was that an offer?



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