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Roommates (loli) Anonymous 12/10/06(Sat)11:32 No. 17319 ID: 5c8966

It all started when I was 19, in my first semester at college. I'd moved away from home and into my first apartment, and got my first roommate as well. He was a year younger than me, but unlike me he hadn't spent a year after graduating highschool saving up his money for tuition and rent. His parents died in an avalanche at a ski resort, and between their considerable savings and the payout from the life insurance, he could afford college and not have to work for years. I hadn't known it when I met him at orientation and we decided to share an apartment, but he also had custody of his 11 year old sister.

The apartment was big, and nicer than I could have ever afforded on my own, so all three of us had separate bedrooms (hers was supposed to be a laundry room or something originally.). I also discovered my roommate was a bit of a dick who neglected his little sister.

I don't think it was intentional, more a result of losing his parents and having to adjust his plans for the future to revolve around caring for his sibling, and he probably wasn't ready for that sort of responsibility. But unless he needed to give her a ride or buy her something she needed, he basically didn't interact with her. He also barely did anything with me; maybe once a week he'd play video games with me, but he spent nearly all his time in class or shut in his room studying.

His little sister was cute, with her blue eyes, freckles, and short, light brown hair, but obviously way too young for me. She didn't play with dolls or anything, so I guess she was mature for her age, but she also spent all her time shut in her room when she wasn't at school. And I don't think she had any friends at her new school either.

After a month or so with my new roommates, we'd settled into a routine. If they weren't exactly friendly, they weren't bad either; quiet, clean, and they were the only way I could afford a really nice apartment just a block from campus.

I wish I'd known then what I know now. It'd have saved me a lot of grief.

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Anonymous 17/11/02(Thu)05:59 No. 25184 ID: ff168d

My reaction to reading this chapter


Anonymous 17/11/06(Mon)02:25 No. 25186 ID: 80f54d


Anonymous 17/11/07(Tue)05:29 No. 25187 ID: dbcb84

This is a really good story, I hope it has a relatively happy ending for the subject matter

Anonymous 17/11/07(Tue)22:09 No. 25188 ID: 07f23c

>that feel when you've been following one of the most amazing stories /elit/ for half a decade, getting cockteased and blueballed by it so many times, and you can't actually fap to the story's first true proper sex scene because you're on meds that have gutted your libido.

But it was worth it, OP. It was so very worth it.

Anonymous 17/11/13(Mon)00:46 No. 25192 ID: 1195e0

Holy shit what a journey... I have so many memories of this story. You are a god

Anonymous 17/11/13(Mon)01:42 No. 25193 ID: 0c2267

hOLY FUCk our savior has returned thank OP

i'm gunna compile all the parts into one txt and post it later so everyone can just read the whole thing instead of scrolling through tons of posts

jesus christ it's been a long time

what a hell of a ride

OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/11/13(Mon)04:50 No. 25194 ID: 02664c


Next chapter will probably be around Christmas or New Year's.

Anonymous 17/11/23(Thu)20:01 No. 25197 ID: 276187

I really hope we get to see her orgasm during penetration sex sooner rather than later, preferably a simultaneous climax

Anonymous 17/11/24(Fri)02:29 No. 25198 ID: cc8911

Keep making her swallow cum loads.
Great work!

Kryters 17/11/25(Sat)14:22 No. 25199 ID: 80d347

I actually thought was pretty lame, after making us wait so long. A pointless poking in the bedroom ? I was expecting a romantic drawn out hard shagging in the tent at the hunting preserve with wolves howling in the distance as she screamed your name, the full moon silhouetted her nubile body.

Anonymous 17/12/01(Fri)14:45 No. 25208 ID: db85e4

I think the flow seemed natural enough, It's more believable story my only issues might be in flushing out the brother's character a bit more, we know he is self absorb and cold, at first I thought he had been abusing his sister then I thought he was distant, it seems odd he never talks about girls or sex or dating in the span of an entire year.

Anonymous 17/12/02(Sat)22:45 No. 25209 ID: 6d0371

I just appreciate the fact he finished inside of her. That's really what made it for me.

Hopefully she will enjoy it more in the future, but the fact it wasn't perfect this time is what makes this story so real.

OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/12/13(Wed)08:00 No. 25225 ID: 6683c5

The next morning I stumbled out in my boxers, poured a bowl of cereal, and sat at the table, waiting for my brain to wake up. Maybe I should start drinking coffee.

Sara wandered in, hair sticking in all directions, night shirt sagging off one shoulder and wearing the cartoon frog panties from yesterday and I suddenly didn't need any caffeine to wake up.

"Mornin' kiddo."


I poured her a bowl of cereal and she flopped into her chair and started crunching away, staring into the void at That Which Man Was Not Meant To Know, located roughly in the center of the table. She was definitely not a morning person.

"How you feel?"



"Yeah. Like... there's a bruise in my privates."

There actually probably was, given that it was her first time and all. And I'd certainly stretched her out a bit.

"It'll get better. You want a Tylenol?"

"No, it's not that bad."

We finished our breakfast and I put our bowls in the sink, then said, "Since we're both skipping school today, you wanna watch a movie?"


We migrated to the couch and I let her pick out a movie. She selected one from Bill's stack of DVD's and I raised my eyebrow; Dr. Strangelove didn't seem like the sort of movie a 12 year old girl would be into. For that matter, I didn't know if it was something I'd be into either.

Turns out, we both liked it. In fact, for the rest of the semester, either of us could crack the other up by shouting, "MEIN FUHRER! I CAN WALK!"

Sara didn't get all the jokes, and we were both somewhat distracted. She sat in my lap during the movie, and before long my hand had mysteriously found its way between her legs and was gently stroking her through her panties. After a bit, she shifted her position on my lap and sat Indian-style, crotch exposed, so I slid my hand into her panties and fondled her crotch directly.

We just sat like that for the rest of the movie, both of us laughing, her face slightly flushed as I slowly, gently rubbed her slit the entire time.

After the last nuclear bomb exploded and the credits ended, Sara suddenly spun around in my lap (trapping my hand in between her legs) and pounced on me with a loud, "RAAAAR!"

We hadn't wrestled in a long time. It was fun just... having fun. After a couple minutes of tussling about, I suddenly flipped her shirt over her head, blinding her and trapping her arms as I pinned her to the couch. Then I pressed my lips to her belly button and blew.


"Aaaaah! Hahaha! Stoooop!"

"Never! Pppbbbbllllt!"

Then I took advantage of the opportunity afforded me and put my mouth over one of her little boobs. The whole thing would just fit inside if I opened my mouth... I blew against her puffy nipple and when that only resulted in a burbly noise, I shook my head back and forth and blew a raspberry.


Sara squirmed her way out of my grasp, wiggling out of her shirt in the process, and stood, legs spread, slightly crouched, ready to dodge in any direction. She was clad in just her panties now, face flushed, breathing heavily, a grin on her face. I lunged for her and she scooted under my swinging arm, bounced off the couch, and jumped on my back.


"Oh no!"

I flopped backwards onto the couch, careful to land on my butt first and then roll onto my back so I didn't squash her, and she shrieked, letting go in an attempt to escape. I rolled around to face her, grabbed her panties, and yanked them off as I stood up, launching her butt and legs in the air as I did so.

She landed flat on the couch with an indignant squawk, then shrieked as I tossed her panties in her face and started tickling her all over.

"N-n-ooo-ooo! Aaaaah! Stop!"

I kept tickling her until she couldn't breath anymore, then I relented and flopped onto the couch next to her. She sprawled beside me, stretching one leg across my stomach, and gasped for breath, still grinning.

"I think I won, kiddo."


"Yeah huh."

"... Ok. You win."

"Ha. Told you."

I looked at her beautiful, naked body and gently rubbed my hand up and down the leg she had on top of me, feeling my erection grow inside my boxers.

"So... whatcha wanna do today, kiddo?"

"Let's spend the whole day naked."

"Now that's a plan!"

I slid out of my boxers and she sat up next to me, taking note of my growing boner.

"You wanna try sex again?"

"Uh-uh," she said, shaking her head. She subconsciously covered her crotch with one hand and winced slightly.

"Ok. You want some girl vitamins?"

She pretended to think about it for a second, then nodded cheerfully. I leaned against the corner of the couch and she laid down across the rest of it, on her belly. Her legs slowly alternated back and forth in the air above her butt and she held herself up on her elbows as as she took my penis into her mouth and began sucking.

I really am a lucky bastard, I thought to myself. I didn't even feel a twinge of guilt for corrupting this sweet, innocent girl either. Not anymore. She was all mine, and I was all hers.

I gently stroked her hair as her head bobbed up and down in my lap, and happily reflected that it was only Friday morning and Bill wouldn't be back until late Sunday evening. I had the better part of three days to do all sorts of naughty things with his little sister.

What would he do if he found out...

Sara cleared her throat and pulled my dick out of her mouth while she stretched her neck, then resumed sucking, and I forgot all about any concern for Bill finding out I was fucking his sister. It's hard to think about anything when a pretty 12 year old has her lips wrapped around your cock.

I continued gently stroking her hair as my balls tensed up and then shot my load into her mouth. She waited until I finished, then swallowed and carefully sucked me clean before sitting up and cuddling against me.

"You like the way that tastes, kiddo?"

"Uh-huh. It doesn't taste weird anymore. I like it."

"Well that's good. I like giving you your vitamins."

She giggled and hugged me, and I squeezed her back.

"Betcha I can kick your butt in Mario Kart!"

"Oh, you do, huh? You're on!"

Yeah. This was going to be a great weekend.

Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)01:12 No. 25238 ID: 0deb37

Wow, a week after a new post and still no replies?! What's going on?

The+Bard 17/12/20(Wed)01:48 No. 25239 ID: 67e40d

It's family invasion holiday portion of the year. That is my guess.

Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)03:30 No. 25240 ID: c47e15


People check on this less often now

Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)04:23 No. 25241 ID: 73d817

Keep on going bro, you still got rapt attention here

OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/12/22(Fri)03:58 No. 25246 ID: c15c05


Next update will be between Christmas and New Year's. Look forward to it.

The+Bard 17/12/23(Sat)03:25 No. 25248 ID: 69067c

Oh, I very much do. I can't stop reading this story.

Anonymous 17/12/31(Sun)13:39 No. 25267 ID: 0cf92e


Anonymous 17/12/31(Sun)21:30 No. 25268 ID: d0c7fc

This story made me get into working out tbh

Anonymous 18/01/02(Tue)00:08 No. 25270 ID: ff5142

He is a nigger

Anonymous 18/01/02(Tue)15:20 No. 25271 ID: ed7a8b

to be fair, he didn't say which christmas and new year's.

OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 18/01/03(Wed)06:56 No. 25273 ID: c93939


Orthodox churches use the Julian calendar for holidays such as Christmas and New Year's. According to the Julian calendar, it is currently December 21st.

Gragnost 18/01/07(Sun)01:35 No. 25282 ID: 551d98

Yeah yeah. Either way we want the promised next part.

Anonymous 18/01/07(Sun)07:21 No. 25283 ID: e1cdb2

Taps fingers...


The+Bard 18/01/08(Mon)02:09 No. 25285 ID: c14470

Please sir, may I have some more? -Oliver Twist, with an empty bowl and big-sad-orphan-boy eyes.

Just kidding. Take your time. Late and good beats early and suck every time.

Anonymous 18/01/16(Tue)05:06 No. 25297 ID: e72d92

I need more, p-please.

Anonymous 18/01/22(Mon)04:16 No. 25310 ID: 9d56f7

still waiting...

OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 18/01/22(Mon)23:27 No. 25311 ID: f06efb

Got my ass knocked down by the flu, still getting over it. Gonna make the next chapter a special one to make up for the delay. It'll go up once I'm feeling better and I'm not hallucinating from all the fucking Nyquil.

The+Bard 18/01/23(Tue)04:25 No. 25312 ID: 8ab234


Given how this flu is going it is good that you are still alive. I am hoping to dodge it myself. Good to know you are ok.

Anonymous 18/01/23(Tue)14:32 No. 25313 ID: 0cf92e

Protip: get some antibiotics, you have a chest infection.

Anonymous 18/01/26(Fri)06:00 No. 25318 ID: 4bf957

Holy fuck, this thing is still going?

Anonymous 18/02/06(Tue)00:40 No. 25342 ID: 5b50a8


Anonymous 18/02/07(Wed)00:10 No. 25346 ID: c9d098

So I'm the only one that got the gorram comment. River Tam and Kaylee Frye. Yep. Oh and reavers too.
Thanks I read through this in a couple of days. Outstanding story. Ill be back.

Anonymous 18/02/22(Thu)11:46 No. 25394 ID: d6eb35

Update when? Come on OP.

Anonymous 18/03/04(Sun)21:31 No. 25428 ID: a557d6

Gotta give her her daily vitamins

The+Bard 18/03/05(Mon)02:06 No. 25429 ID: 8fc537

*plays the speed up song on the mandolin to inspire OP*

OP!T1tXaJv9os 18/03/05(Mon)04:16 No. 25430 ID: f79294

Sorry, hard drive shat the bed and I had to get a whole new computer.


Saturday began when I stumbled out of bed to shit, shower, and shave (in that order), then wandered into the kitchen for breakfast, not bothering with clothing. Sara wandered out shortly after me, yawning and scratching her butt, clad in the usual nightshirt and pink panties. I immediately spotted something unusual and blurted out, "You changed your hair."

"Yep. It kept getting in my face."

She'd pulled her hair back into a pair of pigtails, which changed her appearance more than I would have expected. Still...

"Looks good, kiddo."

"Thanks. Breakfast?"

I set a plate with toast and scrambled eggs in front of her as she flopped bonelessly into the chair and began to nibble her breakfast. She gently whacked my shins with her toes as we ate in silence, then I grabbed both our dishes and put them in the sink. Sara seemed to notice my nudity only just then, and with a mischievous grin she shucked off her shirt and panties so we were both in matching birthday suits.

"Whatcha wanna do today, kiddo?"

"Hmm... Boyfriend-girlfriend stuff!"

"Getting an early start, huh," I chuckled, feeling myself rise to the occasion. She giggled, and I took her by the hand and led her to my room, where we both hopped in bed.

I settled her in my lap and she spread her legs for me, and I began rubbing her smooth little slit. She looked over her shoulder at me with a blissful smile, and I leaned down to give her a peck on the lips. She settled back against me, smiling, and closed her eyes, enjoying the sensation. I had her perfect, total trust.

Which I, of course, abused shamelessly. I'd brought her to orgasm enough times to get a rough idea of how long it took and what signs she gave that she was close, so I concentrated on identifying those signs. Before long she was breathing heavily and had moistened up noticeably, and I increased the intensity of my petting, focusing on the area around her little clit. When her breathing turned into panting, her face flushed as red as her crotch, and she began to scrunch her toes and clench her fists... I eased off. I moved the focus of my rubbing to her lips and slowed down. Her breathing gradually slowed, and I began to pick up the pace again. As I felt her nearing climax a second time, I eased off again, prolonging it. She crinkled her forehead in what was possibly frustration, but I don't think she realized I was deliberately bringing her to the edge and then backing off before she tipped over. All she knew was that she was close, but no fireworks yet.

By the third time I'd brought her to the brink and backed off, my hand was starting to get slick with her juices and she was definitely feeling the effects. She was so close, and yet it hadn't happened yet; she NEEDED to orgasm, and she needed it bad.

Which was when, without feeling an ounce of guilt, I made the big move in my master plan and whispered into her ear, "You wanna try sex again?"

She opened her eyes and pondered the question while I continued gently rubbing up and down her hairless slit, then replied, "Is it gonna hurt like last time?"

"Not as bad. You might be a little sore, but it won't hurt as much as your first time."

She thought about it some more, and I offered more words of encouragement.

"Plus, we can try a different position; that might be more comfortable for you."

"..... ok."

"That's my girl. You're no chicken, are you."


"Ok. Get on your hands and knees."

"Like in the caveman movie?"

"Yup; just like that. Remember when we practiced in the tent?"

Sara rolled off of me and got to her hands and knees on the bed, while I sat up and positioned myself behind her. Straddling my legs on either side of hers, I held her waist with one hand and guided my penis to her slit with the other.

"Ok sweetie, I'm gonna go slow like last time, ok? I'm only gonna go in a little at a time. If it hurts too much or you want to stop, just say so, ok?"

"Ok," she said, a slight tremor in her voice. Her face and crotch were still flushed a bright pink.

I gently pressed the head of my penis to her slit and felt her pillowy soft lips part before it; a little rubbing up and down located the hottest, moistest part and I pushed forward, inserting the head into her vagina. It was so tight it felt like she was trying to pinch the tip off my dick. I began a slow, easy back-and-forth motion, not pulling it out, just moving it. When she seemed ok with that, I began to press forward, pushing deeper. I felt her tense up and she sucked in air between her teeth with a hiss.

"You ok, kiddo?"

She nodded, but didn't say anything. I continued the gentle back-and-forth movement, concentrating on not hurting her, and gradually thrust my way deeper and deeper inside her. After several minutes, I felt the head of my dick press up against something, and my crotch was mashed up against hers. I was completely inside her.

"How you doin', Sara?"


"... what?"

"I'm ok."

"All right. Here we go then."

She tensed up again, so I waited a little bit until she relaxed slightly, then began to slowly, gently, thrust in and out of her a little at a time. Holy crap, it felt amazing. She'd gotten pretty good at blowjobs, but actually putting your penis inside a girl was way better. It was hot, wet, tight, squishy... honestly, there's no way to really describe it that doesn't make it sound kinda gross. You just have to experience it. If you've never tried it yourself, I definitely recommend it. 10 out of 10, would penetrate again.

Both hands on her hips to help her hold steady, I gently thrust in and out of Sara at a steady pace. Before long, she was breathing heavily again and clenching the sheets in her hands. My plan seemed to be working: her first time, she'd focused on being scared and how much it hurt. This time, Sara seemed to be enjoying my dick as much as she liked the heavy petting. I picked up the pace a little and she squirmed underneath me to keep herself upright, but made no protest. I took that as a sign to go even faster and began pumping my hips; Sara rocked back and forth in time to my thrusts, pigtails bouncing on either side of her head, panting and making little squeaks. I could actually feel my balls slap against her pussy as I fucked her.

"You ok?"

She just gasped for air, but eventually nodded vigorously. Then she suddenly tensed up, clenching the sheets so tight that her knuckles turned white, and buried her face into the pillow as she let out an odd sound somewhere between a moan and a squeak. At the same time, her vagina seemed to ripple down the length of my cock and squeeze it to the point that for a second, it was honestly difficult for me to pull out of her for the next thrust. She raised her head again, gasping for air, and seemed to suddenly go limp, and I realized I'd just felt her orgasm from the inside.

Just the thought of that instantly made my dick harder, and only a few thrusts later I felt myself tense up, my balls tingle, and I hilted myself in her crotch and fired my load as deep into her as I could. I hadn't pent it up like last time, but it still seemed to go on forever. Honestly, by the time I was finished, my balls were sore, like they were about to implode. Sara went limp, and my hands on her waist were the only thing keeping her top-down, bottom-up, as I caught my breath and waited for my erection to die down. Any excuse to stay inside of her for as long as possible.

All good things must come to an end eventually, however, and I pulled my now flaccid penis out of her with a barely audible, but definitely wet-sounding, noise. A bit of my cum slowly oozed out of her and down the length of her slit, and I patted her rear with possessive pride. I collapsed onto the bed beside her and she flopped sideways on top of me, still blushing and gasping for breath.

"How was that, kiddo? Better?"

She nodded, then replied, "uh-huh," breathlessly. I gently felt one of her little boobs with my hand, then reached up to take her by the chin and tilt her head so I could give her another kiss on the lips.

"Did it hurt?"

"Not as much. It's sore again. But it felt good."


"Really good."

"I'm glad. I like it when I can make you feel good."

"Me too."

I snorted at her comment and she giggled, snuggling up against me.

"So you think you wanna try sex again in the future?"

"Can we do it that way again?"

"Sure. We can do it however you want."

"I love you," she said dreamily as she rolled over on top of me and put her arms around me.

"I love you too, kiddo," I said, holding my little girlfriend to me. I closed my eyes and felt myself slowly drifting off to sleep; a nap sounded good right about now.

"How come in Dinosaur Planet all the muscley people wanted to eat meat and take over?"

"... what?"

Anonymous 18/03/05(Mon)20:37 No. 25431 ID: 6d0371

Damn you OP, you make me cum like no other. Especially the part with the balls slap <3

The+Bard 18/03/06(Tue)05:18 No. 25432 ID: 8fc537

*Looks at the mandolin in disbelief*
It... It worked?

Anonymous 18/03/06(Tue)06:38 No. 25433 ID: 8e2488

She better be pregnant

Anonymous 18/03/07(Wed)03:30 No. 25436 ID: d1edc9

You are a god, OP... No matter the delays, the waiting, whatever happens... You are number one

Anonymous 18/03/10(Sat)15:04 No. 25444 ID: 06eb22

10 out of 10... would penetrate again...

Had me rolling...

Anonymous 18/03/22(Thu)23:36 No. 25467 ID: a557d6

Back to her vitamins while she's sore.

Anonymous 18/03/29(Thu)14:25 No. 25477 ID: 6d0371

Are they ever going to try ass, too? I'm so excited :D

Anonymous 18/04/13(Fri)20:07 No. 25506 ID: 6d0371


Not sure if you have to bump on 7chan to avoid 404, just making sure.

Anonymous 18/04/20(Fri)14:34 No. 25514 ID: 93166e

It's a low-traffic website.Some threads here are five years old

OP!T1tXaJv9os 18/04/20(Fri)23:41 No. 25515 ID: c34b76


THIS thread is six years old. It'll disappear eventually without bumps, but leaving the front page isn't the end of the world.

Anonymous 18/04/21(Sat)08:14 No. 25517 ID: 56b278

Hey OP, you doing all right?


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