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No. 4502 ID: d5a4a4
Ok, so this is the first time i have written a story such as this. I hope it goes well, suggestions accepted. I'm posting the first part to see if its worth continuing.

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“Here goes nothing.” Thought a mischievous-looking William, leaning against the wall just outside the women’s locker-room. He took a deep breath, walked up to the locker room door and pulled it open, casually striding inside. “Hello ladies.” he nonchalantly announced as he put his stuff down on one of the benches, opened a locker, and began to change. However, once he had his shirt off, he paused, the room dead silent. Not the reaction he had been hoping for. “Something wrong?” he asked as he turned to face several lividly furious, yet half-naked, college women. After a quick glance around the room, he quickly realized this wasn’t the locker-room he had meant to enter. “This wouldn’t happen to be the Cheerleader’s Locker room by chance, would it?” he asked with a hint of nervousness. “No! Guess again.” One of the girl’s snarled as another pointed out a poster just above the entrance to him. “Ah…” he said with a gulp. “Rugby… my apologies ladies. Looks like I have the wrong changing room.” He said, quickly gathering his stuff and bolting out of the room, shouting, “Was nice staring…I mean talking with you ladies, gotta go!” Unfortunately for him, half the team was already dressed and came charging after him. “Jeez, they sure do know how to hold a grudge.” He said to himself as he sprinted as fast as he could down the hallway. Rounding a corner, he ducked into what looked to be an empty classroom before the rubgby could catch up. After slamming the door behind him, he slid to the floor in relief. “Man, that was way too close.” As he looked around the room, he found he was not alone. An equally surprised Irish-looking young man was staring at him.
‘Well he doesn’t seem too intimidating’” William thought to himself after calming himself down. Getting up, he strode over to the guy, extending his hand to him and introduced himself. “Hey, you don’t seem to bad, bookworm, I’m William Za…” he started, but was interrupted by the heavy foodsteps of his pursuers coming back down the hall. “Hold that thought.” He quickly bolted for the storage closet. Before shutting the door, William poked his head out and glared at him, “You saw nothing.” As soon as he had shut the door, a couple members of the Ruby team entered the room. After a quick glance around the room, they were about to leave until they noticed the single guy in the room.“You didn’t see a tall, dark haired nuisance at all, have you?” One of them asked. Without hesitating or looking up he replied in a oddly soft voice while rolling his eyes, “Nope, just the one I keep where the sun don’t shine.” The girl who had asked went a deep shade of red and led the rest of them out of the room and back to the locker-room.
Shortly after the Rugby players left, William poked his head out and asked in a loud whisper. “Is it safe to come out?” The bookworm’s head hit his desk before he could reply. “Yes, it was safe the minute they left. Are you finished? I’m kinda busy.” In a dramatic fashion, William burst out of the closet and sat down next to the bookworm. “Whew, that was close. That was a nice comeback you had there.” After a moment of silence, it seemed like the bookworm wasn’t going to reply, so he continued on. “Anyways, were did we leave off? Right, I’m William Zachary, how about you? I can’t just call you bookworm forever.” Slamming his pencil down, the bookworm finally spoke. “Since it seems you aren’t going to leave me alone, I might as well tell you. My name is Caleb Ulysses McKinley.” He spoke quietly, knowing what came next, picking up his pencil, he back to working on his paper. William repeated the named over and over in his head until he finally got it. “Wow, why is it always the quiet once who are named so epically. Well Caleb, I’ll be seeing you around, places to be, things to see, women to flirt with and spy on.” He said with a slight wink and strode out the room, leaving Caleb to himself.
“Ah, here we go, this time I know it’s the right place!” William said to himself, standing outside the Cheerleader’s locker-room this time. “Well, here we go again” he thought to himself as he once again nonchalantly walked into the locker-room full of the blossoming naked cheerleaders he had been looking for. “Things are good for once!” he continued to think. “Hello you fine ladies, how are you today?” He asked in a charming tone as he began to undress as if to change. A couple girls quickly screamed and tried to cover themselves, but one walked up and nodded to the rest. In that instant, the initial shock was gone, the situation became, suddenly, very erotic. The cheerleaders immediately surrounded him, their hands roaming all over his body, reaching down to tease him. “Whoa ladies, ladies, there is enough of me to go around!” William exclaimed as they began pulling on his clothes. With the tell-tale sound of ripping fabric, the cheerleaders tore off his clothes, leaving him stark naked. They all backed away and giggled in as William went a deep shade of red. “He got to see us, we get to see him.” The head cheerleader sneered, “Not too impressive.” Shaking his head and quickly covering himself at this comment, William turned to leave. “Not too impressive, eh? Well, at least I don’t have to over-compensate with implants.” He yelled over his shoulder as he bolted down the now crowded hallway, covering himself as best he could.
As he rounded the corner, he found himself back at the classroom he had been in earlier. “Hey, I know this room!” he exclaimed to out loud and burst into the room for a second time. Caleb was still hard at work. “Hey there buddy, how’s it going?” William exuberantly exclaimed as if their previous meeting had made them best friends. Caleb looked him up and down, than quietly, yet sarcastically, asked, “More girl problems? Or did you finally move on to guys?” William sat down next to Caleb once again, he said eagerly, “Well… you see, that’s why I’m here.” Caleb’s head shot up instantly, shock written all over his face. He quickly crammed his books in his bag and got up to leave, saying to William, “I’m leaving now.” And stormed out of the room. William dashed after him, and burst out of the door into the crowded hallway, still completely naked. He started yelling to Caleb, “You’re leaving me?! After all we have been through! I know you enjoyed it! I know you did Caleb!!” Caleb stopped dead in his tracks, face completely red everyone around him started staring and giggling.
Caleb turned around and stormed back towards William and dragged him back into the classroom. William grinned at him “I knew that would get your attention! Now, I need you to go to my dorm and get me some clothes.” He half asked, half demanded. Caleb was furious with William at this point. “You aren’t going to leave me alone are you?” He demanded. “Of course not. You’re my new best friend.” William retorted. “Fine! Where and how?” Caleb nearly shouted, ready to pull his hair out in frustration. “Well, I just moved in today, so all my clothes are still in my luggage. My room is room 69, on the first floor.” It took Caleb a minute to figure out why that seemed familiar. He stared at William in disbelief. “You have GOT to be kidding?!” William gave him a confused look. “What?” “T-t-t-that’s my room! You’re my roommate?!” Caleb groaned in disbelief, covering his face with his hands. “Oh? What a coincidence! Nice to meet you roomy, good thing too, you would have seen all this eventually.” William replied playfully as Caleb left with a groan.
>> No. 4505 ID: 1055f9
good work, proceed.
no problems at this point
>> No. 4507 ID: e4a186
God damn I'm excited for this story =D.
>> No. 4511 ID: 0bcf90
you must continue this. plaese tell me this will result in some hot guy on guy action. because you left out tags that might tell as such
>> No. 4519 ID: 49188f
Does anyone else have benny hill music in their mind while reading this story?
>> No. 4525 ID: c91542
huge block of text
>> No. 4527 ID: 09eee6
>>4525

you read a good story and that's ALL you can say?

Bitch please... don't complain about the formatting.
>> No. 4565 ID: d8a6cf
Is this gay? or should I be excited?
>> No. 4572 ID: 97ddd7
>>4565

This. I'm confus.

It could go either way at this point. Tags would have been useful for a story like this.
>> No. 4579 ID: 110a24
Maybe Vyre is secretly asking for a consensus on which way to take it.

I say Gay.
>> No. 4584 ID: 0616e2
it should start of straight with caleb fapping to all the girls william brings back to his room, then it should go gay at some point somehow maybe hinting throughout.
>> No. 4612 ID: d5a4a4
Thanks for the insight guys, its helped me figure out exactly where this will end up, sorry if i seem a little slow, i have been having troubles deciding which of my ideas to put next... i should have an update up soon
>> No. 4778 ID: c85806
bamp 4 moar
>> No. 4780 ID: 110a24
IF THIS DOESN'T BECOME GAY I SWEAR TO GOD I WILL KILL YOU IN THE FACE.
>> No. 4811 ID: 09eee6
here's a bump for ya Vyre
>> No. 4818 ID: bb4fa8
>>4780
YOU'RE DOING IT WRONG
>> No. 4823 ID: 7e6a74
bamp
>> No. 4912 ID: d5a4a4
Sorry to keep you all waiting. College work is the suck, and not the pleasurable kind.

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Ch. 2
“Wake up!” William yelled at a sleeping Caleb. Caleb noted that the screaming seemed to be coming from above him and, more alarmingly, there was a great pressure on his waist. Caleb shot his eyes open to the sight of William sitting on him. “What the fuck are you doing?!!” Caleb screamed at him, shoving him off of him and the bed, getting up. “Well, whatever it was, you seemed to have enjoyed it.” William commented with a smirk. “What do you….?” Caleb began as he realized his dick was hard, as it usually was after waking up. “Ok, now that you have thoroughly embarrassed me, why the hell did you wake me up?” He snapped, looking out their dorm window. It was still dark outside. “The hell? What time is it?” Caleb asked, looking around for his watch. “To answer your question, it’s one in the morning. WE are going to a party, so get dressed!” William said excitedly, clapping Caleb on the back. About five minutes later, they were both dressed and William was pulling an unwilling Caleb along with him.

The huge house that was the site of the party was crowded with people. Every window was wide-open, people dancing, drinking, and having sex in, pretty much, plain view. Drunken partiers were everywhere and there were more drunk women than drunk men in attendance from the looks of it. “What kind of party is this?” Caleb asked absent-mindedly, not sure whether to be disgusted or excited at the scene before him. “Welcome to your first frat party buddy. You’ll enjoy it, trust me.” Willam shouted over the music blasting from inside, punching Caleb in the shoulder rather hard. A completely smashed frat boy stumbled up to them, grinned, then proceeded to vomit all over the ground in front of them, then stumble on his way. William shrugged, “Eh… you’ll really have to trust me on this, come on, let’s go get some drinks!” William dragged Caleb to the bar, making several suggestive passes on every women they passed. Half-way to the bar and Caleb found himself alone, William having abandoned him to hit on some girls somewhere.

Enchanted by the fervor of the party, Caleb began to worm his way through the crowd, somehow ending up with a drink in his hand as he walked out the back door to the pool area. As he crossed the threshold, his foot got snagged and he stumbled over the threshold of the door and ended up face first in a massive pillow of cleavage. “Well hello there frisky, you usually wait till after I’m drunk to start fondling me.” Caleb blushed a deep shade of red and quickly jumped back to apologize, only to be awestruck the unbelievably beautiful young woman standing in front of him. “I..I..I just wanted to see the view….I heard they were amazing.” Caleb finally managed to stutter. Surprisingly, the woman laughed. “Good comeback.” She chuckled, putting a finger to Caleb’s lips to stop him from stuttering out anymore. “What’s your name cutie?” Caleb swallowed, regaining some of his composure. “Caleb. Name’s Caleb.” The big-breasted woman smiled. “I’m Virginia. Nice to meet you, Caleb.” She looked around and leaned close to him. “How about we go somewhere more private and get to know each other a little better, Caleb?” Caleb looked at her in surprise, “Um… s-sure!” Virginia laughed heartily as she lead him back inside and upstairs to an unoccupied room.

“Oo, William! It’s so big!!” a drunken women laughed to an equally drunk William. “I know, it’sh beastly.” He replied back, taking a bite out of his huge slice of cake. “God that’sh good. I shhhould share shome with Caleb, HEY CALEB! You want shome cake?” Willliam called out over his shoulder, mouth still full of cake. When he got no reply, he whipped his head around only to find Caleb was nowhere to be found “Come on babe, we need to find my roommate…” He told his drunken female companion as he swayed dangerously as he stood.

“Wow, that’s a big bed.” Virginia said ecstatically, jumping on the soft mattress. “Wow, it’s so soft. Come on Caleb, come join me.” She cooed to Caleb, trying to entice him over. Caleb had a considerable tent in his pants and was only getting harder from watching Virginia flaunt. He hesitated to join her and, instead, took a moment to take in her features. Her shoulder length blonde hair was tied up in a loose ponytail, her full, curving cleavage seemed to strain under her shirt and her long slender legs were smooth and supple. His hesitation was making her impatient, but Caleb was rooted to the spot, transfixed. Virginia began to play with her large breasts, hands massaging them, her fingers pinching and playing with her now hard and erect nipples through her shirt. Caleb watched in awe as she molested herself. “Caleb, stop watching and come play with me.” She purred seductively, pouting. After watching her work on herself so… casually in front of him, he quickly jumped on the bed and quickly had Virginia out of her clothes. “Come on Caleb… ” she purred, reaching down between her legs to stroke her clit.
Caleb eagerly got on top of her, grabbing her large breasts with his hands, squeezing them and playing with her nipples. “Mmmm... that feels good.” She moaned as she moved her hand from her moist pussy to thick bulge in his pants. “Looks like this guy wants to play too.” Virginia grinned mischievously as she unbuttoned his jeans and pulled out his dick. “Oh my god Caleb… it’s huge!” Virginia gasped with a sparkle in her eye as she ran her hand up and down his shaft. Caleb smiled sheepishly as he planted soft kisses along her shoulders, neck, and breasts as Virginia continued to stroke him. She wrapped one arm around the back of his head and forced him down, lips pressed together in a hot, sensual kiss that left Caleb breathless, tongues dancing together as his hands roamed the luscious curves of her body. “Mmm, you’re doing pretty well. Experienced?” She moaned in his ear lustily. Caleb smirked and nibbled on her neck. “You’ll have to find that out for yourself.” He pulled his shirt off and took of his pants, forcing his hips between her legs, head of his hard dick hovering lightly against her soaked pussy. Teasingly, he pushed just barely into her, then withdrew. She whined and locked her legs around his waist. “None of that now, Caleb.” She chuckled as she pulled him into another kiss.

Things were going so well… until William made a boisterous entrance through the door, a half-naked chick hanging on his arm and roaring drunk. “Caleb!! There you are!” He slurred, wavering unsteadily on his feet. William’s face was livid with a combination of embarrassment and absolute rage, Virginia looking confused and very cross. William grinned and waved at them, “Way to shcore, Caleb. I’ll be nesht door if you need me, havin’ a good time. Wooo!!” He stumbled away, the girl following him.

“Who was that?” Virginia asked crossly, untangling herself from Caleb. “Roommate.” Caleb growled, then turned back to her. “Where are you going?” He asked when he noticed she was gathering up her clothes… “Leaving. I can’t keep going after being interrupted like that.” Virginia huffed, quickly redressing and storming off. “Virginia, wait! Don’t go yet!” Caleb begged as he quickly pulled on his clothes and tried to catch up to her. William intercepted him, looking a lot more sober than he had earlier. “That was fast. How’d it go man?” He asked in a slightly hushed voice. Caleb was so pissed off, he didn’t even realize his arm was already in motion until his fist connected with William’s job. “Do you have to FUCKING ruin everything?!” He snarled at him before hurrying down the stairs to try and catch up with Virginia. Caleb managed to catch up with her as she was walking down the sidewalk. “Virginia, wait!” He panted, exhausted from having to sprint through and over drunk party goers. “Oh, Caleb. I told you I’m not in the mood after that.” She said, sounding a little irritated. “I know, that’s not why I caught up with you. I want to apologize, for my idiot of a roommate. Look, can I make it up to you somehow? It doesn’t have to be strictly sex.” Virginia’s expression was one of surprise. “My, how thoughtful of you. Well… how about you buy me dinner tomorrow night?” Caleb grinned, “Sure. Anywhere you like.” She pulled out a small notebook and pen from her purse and jotted down her number. “Call me tomorrow and we’ll talk some more.” He took the folded piece of paper and carefully pocketed it. “Night Caleb.” Virginia continued on her way, Caleb watching for a little while, then deciding he should go bother William.

When Caleb got to William’s room, the door flew open and the girl was storming out, looking very pissed off. “Baby, wait! Come on, cut me some slack!” William shouted, standing at the door stark naked. Caleb stifled a laugh. “Too small to get the job done, eh?” William shot him a dirty look. “Shut up Caleb.” He went back inside and got dressed. “Let’s get out of here. This party is lame anyway.”
>> No. 4914 ID: 7e6a74
sweet, very bonerific.
>> No. 4972 ID: 09eee6
bamp. moar plz.
>> No. 5189 ID: 09eee6
back to page 0 with ye!
>> No. 5195 ID: e1bc45
slow but interesting character dynamics
>> No. 5198 ID: 3377d9
inb4 gay sex to make up.
>> No. 5228 ID: c3f382
Any moar?
>> No. 5348 ID: 09eee6
bamp
>> No. 5502 ID: bebf1a
bump
>> No. 5661 ID: 9f7a36
Bamp Biddy Bamp Bamp Bamp
>> No. 5715 ID: dd552d
needs some gay at some point to save from being some boring college sex story.
>> No. 5744 ID: a6ec02
>>needs some gay at some point to save from being some boring college sex story.

so... you want a boring college sex story? cause every tale i've read on this line devolves into group "experimenting" about halfway through. i say lets let the author tell the story they want to, without pressuring them into anything, due largely to the fact that i really like the main two guys already!
>> No. 5820 ID: 61cfea
'allo, been a while since you heard from me obviously, forgive me for the lack of updates. Finals in college are coming up for me, and the past couple weeks i have been working my ass off to save my grades. an update should be posted within the next week or so. Once again, forgive me.
>> No. 6538 ID: 561ca7
oh hey, sorry, didn't see you there. Sorry for the bump. >:)
>> No. 6957 ID: 6320b1
Ok... so blow the lid on this one... I know Vyre, very intimately (I'll leave that to you guys' imaginations)

Anyway, he's been hit with a heavy work load at school and bad writer's block, so I'm helping him with this story. I'm going to be ghost writing for him, helping him get his story moving again, but it will still be Vyre's style, since he gets final say on the updates. Together, this story should be rolling pretty quickly and will revive his inspiration.

So, an update will show up soon.
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