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Anonymous 13/04/24(Wed)10:39 No. 18761 ID: c4ee47

Bump


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Anonymous 13/04/24(Wed)18:40 No. 18763 ID: 3128b6

bump


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Anonymous 13/04/27(Sat)04:33 No. 18773 ID: 59aa4e

Shit, I've just about given up on waiting.


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Anonymous 13/04/28(Sun)08:55 No. 18784 ID: 27430a

>>18773
I haven't....


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HalfBaked 13/04/30(Tue)02:58 No. 18808 ID: 0d017a

If the OP doesn't post an update by friday I will update it with what I think should happen next(basically a chapter update). By no means do I plan to continue the story provided the OP comes back, nor do I consider anything I contribute canon (neither should you). I'll post it on pastebin so it doesn't confuse anyone and you may ignore it if you choose.


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Anonymous 13/04/30(Tue)20:56 No. 18816 ID: 59aa4e

>>18808
I hope you're working on it.


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Anonymous 13/04/30(Tue)22:08 No. 18817 ID: 0f9b46

OP i hope you realize how rare it is for a story to continue to remain at the front page after going more than a month with no update, it speaks volumes as to how much we like your story and want you to continue it with as much haste as you can muster.


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Anonymous 13/05/01(Wed)02:13 No. 18818 ID: 1c7118

>>17319
Now now, he's got some stuff going on, give him time.


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HalfBaked 13/05/01(Wed)04:26 No. 18820 ID: 0d017a

>>18818
I'm not trying to replace him. if anything the opposide. Me writing would make everyone hop off his back about getting out an update RIGHT NOW.
>>18816
I've had it written out for like, a week now. All I have to do is proofread and make final edits whenever i'm not so busy.


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HalfBaked 13/05/01(Wed)05:20 No. 18822 ID: 0d017a

>>18820
>>18820

*opposite. Fuck spelling.


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Anonymous 13/05/03(Fri)00:29 No. 18840 ID: 59aa4e

>>18822
>>18820
>>18808
Hope you're prepared to post.


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HalfBaked 13/05/03(Fri)03:09 No. 18841 ID: 0d017a

>>18840

I never said I would post ON Friday. That's a bit unlikely as I most likely won't be home until Sunday. Sorry


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Anonymous 13/05/04(Sat)12:50 No. 18851 ID: c85651

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Anonymous 13/05/05(Sun)00:52 No. 18853 ID: 8f9f6f

>>17319
I think that I would rather wait for the original author.


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Anonymous 13/05/05(Sun)04:37 No. 18854 ID: 61bc43

>>18853

You need wait no longer. Don't have my new computer yet (unexpected expenses came up), but fuck it. You've all been very patient, and patience should be rewarded.



I woke up late, rolled out of bed, and got dressed. Awkwardly, because I had incredible morning wood. Bill had already left for class, but I ran into Sara as she was heading out the door.

"You're gonna be late," I told her.

"Nah, the bus has to wait for ten minutes. I'll make it- Oh!"

She yelped as she picked up her backpack and spilled the contents all over the floor, having left it unzipped and grabbed it by the bottom. As she bent over to pick her things up, her skirt hiked up and I saw that her panties were yellow with little sunflowers on them.

I am such a pervert.

I was probably blushing, feeling guilt at staring a little girl's ass, and as she put the last pencil into her backpack and stood up, she noticed me and asked, "what?"

"Nothing! Um... your skirt is hiked up."

She flushed slightly, making the light dusting of freckles on her cheeks disappear for a moment, and tugged her skirt back down.

"Thanks."

Feeling awkward, I saw her out the door, locked up, and walked off to my first class. I ended up being twenty minutes late, but I don't think anyone noticed me slip in.

Classes were boring. Professor Ben Stein kept droning the entire class (seriously, he has the same monotone and everything) and I nearly fell asleep, and my other classes were nothing spectacular either. At least my next paper wasn't due for another week, and I didn't have any other assignments for once.

I walked back to the apartment at a nice, leisurely pace, enjoying the cool weather, and noticed the bus letting the kids off. Sara was one of the last ones off the bus, spotted me, and waved, so I waved back and we walked back to the apartment together.

Without any prompting from me, she grabbed onto my hand as we strolled down the sidewalk and started telling me about how horrible her new school was, how the boys were jerks, the girls were mean and stupid, the teacher was boring, and basically how everything was the most terrible thing ever. She also had a bounce in her step, practically skipping, and was smiling the entire time, so I found the whole thing amusing and just went along with it, mmhmming and ahing and I seeing at the appropriate moments.

I didn't realize until much later that her cheerfulness was because of my company. I had a vague idea of how desperate she was for a friend, but didn't think much of it at the time.

Without even realizing it, I was hoist by my own petard. What started out innocent... Well, no single raindrop thinks it's responsible for the flood.

When we got to the apartment, Bill had already arrived, having driven his car (he was still pissed about it being keyed), and after a gruff acknowledgement of our arrival he disappeared into his room again.

The two of us settled at the table, I started reading the next assignment for my literature class: The Song of Roland. Holy shit, medieval poems are long. I was actually relieved when Sara asked for help with her math homework, and I scooted my chair to her side of the table and walked her through the problems she'd been assigned. When we finished, she was practically beaming.

"Thanks! It would have taken me waaaay longer if you hadn't helped!"

"No problem," I said, patting her on the head as I stood to fix dinner. "Any time you need a hand, I'd be glad to help."

Like I said, no single raindrop. But raindrops add up...


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HalfBaked 13/05/05(Sun)05:02 No. 18855 ID: 0d017a

>>18854
Oh wow, nevermind then... guess it's no longer necessary... Time to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T3bWon3Tg-8


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Anonymous 13/05/05(Sun)07:18 No. 18856 ID: c85651

Thanks op.



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