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Anonymous 13/10/20(Sun)23:44 No. 19966 ID: c1b02f

>>19965

the hell makes you think this story is ending?


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 13/10/21(Mon)05:51 No. 19968 ID: 61bc43

>>19965

Yeah, what the hell makes you think it's ending?

This train has a looooot of track to ride before it derails!


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Anonymous 13/10/21(Mon)06:56 No. 19969 ID: 129a86

I'm not sure what the plans are for the pace of this story at this time. I would like to see you keep the same slow pace that you have, just because they did some exploring over a weekend doesn't mean they should be seasoned professionals at this. The suspense makes the story a lot better.

Can't wait for more, thanks for the story!


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not op 13/10/21(Mon)07:34 No. 19970 ID: 7d42f8

>>19968
>Ride.
Haha.


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Anonymous 13/10/21(Mon)22:04 No. 19973 ID: 84fdc1

MOAR


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Anonymous 13/10/22(Tue)01:27 No. 19975 ID: ab28f9

>>19973
don't be a dick


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Anonymous 13/10/22(Tue)04:49 No. 19976 ID: 1c7118

>>17319
Can I be a vagina...?


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Anonymous 13/10/24(Thu)13:22 No. 19987 ID: a23450

>>19899
>haven't pooped since we left, no TP

wat... poor girl


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Anonymous 13/10/27(Sun)19:33 No. 20004 ID: cffd9f

Hey op, when will you post the next part? My f5 hurts.


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Anonymous 13/10/28(Mon)03:39 No. 20006 ID: 3b4e79

>>20004
>Also, I'm not going on
sabbatical until I finish the camping trip, for those who are curious.
>>19834

Probably not for a while (aka anywhere between a month and half a year)


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Anonymous 13/10/31(Thu)08:14 No. 20040 ID: b5bf13

Back to the front page. Moar please :)


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Anonymous 13/11/03(Sun)04:52 No. 20063 ID: bcce14

First time I've ever been on this board, and this was the only thread that piqued my interest. I thank you, good sir, for your amazing accomplishments of the literary arts, and I hope to fucking god he bangs Sara some time soon like the little slut she is.


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Anonymous 13/11/03(Sun)13:29 No. 20066 ID: 971e7c

Seriously the best work here. But some real difficulties or problems for the characters to run into could help give the story more substance. A story with some conflict could enhance the adventure.



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