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Anonymous 14/02/07(Fri)00:30 No. 21062 ID: e2448e

>>21049
Another author's note, but with some apocalyptic wasteland sex included. For the story, plot before sex would be appreciated.


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Anonymous 14/02/08(Sat)03:03 No. 21075 ID: f5b1c2

>>21054
What about reading her diary entries?


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Anonymous 14/02/08(Sat)09:12 No. 21078 ID: e4bde3

>>17319
Dear diary, today I sucked a dick!


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Anonymous 14/02/08(Sat)15:22 No. 21079 ID: 92664c

The first person bit is what gives it so much of the nice tension. Telling it from Sara's
viewpoint would be like playing minesweeper with all the mines visible.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 14/02/09(Sun)00:25 No. 21081 ID: 61bc43

Yeah, we're not getting any chapters from Sara's perspective, sorry.

Anything else?


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Anonymous 14/02/09(Sun)02:16 No. 21082 ID: 011f36

>>21081

Since they are boyfriend-girlfriend now, maybe some activities like going shopping for clothes, to the cinema, to a drive-in theater, to the restaurant, etc.

Add in a pinch of romance and sex.


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Anonymous 14/02/09(Sun)02:17 No. 21083 ID: e4bde3

>>17319
We love your writing, that is all.


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Anonymous 14/02/09(Sun)02:17 No. 21084 ID: e4bde3

>>17319
We love your writing, that is all.


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Anonymous 14/02/09(Sun)06:23 No. 21085 ID: 92664c

You should have them deal with how some of the girls at Sara's school have 'boyfriends' and how shallow and fragile those relationships are and what this means in light of their own.


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Anonymous 14/02/10(Mon)15:42 No. 21094 ID: dc720b

>>21085
Pretty good idea this. Might she also get jealous easily since the relationship is a secret?

Whatever happens keep us guessing.


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Anonymous 14/02/11(Tue)08:46 No. 21102 ID: ce190f

>>21085
>>21094

yeah no, this sounds pretty lame. OP, just keep doing your thing, a bit more of story would be great


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Uncle+Rick 14/02/11(Tue)16:04 No. 21103 ID: a77b98

>>21102

Couldn't agree more man. Those suggestions sound downright awful.


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Anonymous 14/02/12(Wed)07:08 No. 21108 ID: 011f36

Sara has to leave for [enter reason] for a couple of days and she asks the protagonist not to masturbate during that time. She wants him to wait for her since they are now boyfriend-girlfriend. She makes him promise. He does. He has a hard time but he successfully manages to not fap.

When she finally comes back, Bill is the one who leaves for 2 days for [enter reason]. The protagonist surprises Sara with the fact that he made a reservation to a fancy restaurant and has a romantic evening planned. She is really happy but then looks a bit worried because she doesn't have a nice dress to wear.

He decides to go shopping with Sara in the afternoon before going to the restaurant. After picking a couple of dresses, she goes to the changing room and he manages to enter her cabin unseen. They make-out. She goes on her knees and starts sucking and gets a good taste of his precum. He is too scared to get caught so he stops before orgasm and leaves the cabin unseen. She picks a very nice dress although it's pricy. He still decides to buy her the dress as a Valentine's present.

When they were leaving the mall, they pass an underwear boutique. She tells him that she wants some.

Afterward, they go back to the apartment and prepare to go to the restaurant. They both take a shower (not together). He shaves his balls and wears a tie. She puts some makeup on, wears the new underwear and the dress. She looks stunning. It really turns on the protagonist.

They drive to the restaurant. They are seated in a secluded area where almost no one can see them. They eat [food] and he drinks wine. They have a nice, almost adult, conversation. They manage to touch themselves a bit under the table.

After the meal, they go see a movie at a drive-in theater. They cuddle. During a sex scene they start making out. She sucks him again and gets another good taste of his precum. They don't go further and he doesn't have an orgasm because they are afraid of getting caught.

They drive home. He brings her in his arms to his room where he lights candles and puts music on. They slowly get undress while making out. He ends up on his back on the bed and she realizes that he doesn't get erect even if she jerks him. He tells her that it might be because of the alcohol, but that there are special ways to make it go hard. He tells her that balls are a very sensitive part of a man, even more so than the penis. She starts massaging his balls with her hand. She procedes to kiss them, then lick them, then suck each of them. Finally, she manages to take his whole ballsack in her mouth and starts sucking and licking with her gentle tougue. During this time he massages her clitoris. He his now fully erect and has precum coming out. She tastes it and alternates between sucking his balls licking his precum.

He then returns the favor and eats her out.

She then gets on all fours. He gets behind her and slides his dick between her ass cheeks. His precum is oozing out and makes it slippery. He then puts his dick between her labia and slides it there without penetration. His precum mixes with some of her juices. She reaches between her legs and holds his dick firmly against her slit. Some precum oozes out and she periodically licks her fingers. He tells her to grab, caress and fondle his balls to get more out. She does and tries to not miss a drop.

Meanwhile, he places his hand on her butt and his thumb on her asshole. He massages her asshole and enters slightly. Her moans are quite audible now.

When he can't hold back any longer, he grabs her head and pulls her closer. She understands whats happening and quickly wraps her lips around his penis. He shoots a lot of cum in her mouth and she manages to swallow every drop. She looks up at him with a grin and licks her lips: she is very happy he kept his promise.

She says: « I love you ».

He says: « I love you too ».


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Anonymous 14/02/12(Wed)08:06 No. 21109 ID: 33e388

>>21108
this is terrible and shares nothing in common with the rest of the story, as well as not making sense (you don't take a 11-12 year old girl out to dinner). At least you tried. Wait for OP next time.


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Anonymous 14/02/12(Wed)10:33 No. 21111 ID: ed0b9f

>>21109

I beg to differ about the dinner comment, assuming you are a hitman named Leon.


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Anonymous 14/02/12(Wed)12:23 No. 21114 ID: 92aed4

>>21108
fuck off


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Anonymous 14/02/12(Wed)18:35 No. 21118 ID: dc720b

>>21114
No need to be rude fellas. Just a "I don't like the idea" is fine.


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Anonymous 14/02/12(Wed)20:02 No. 21119 ID: e4bde3

I thought that Op actually posted. way to dash my hopes and dreams.

The idea itself, I am not crazy about, but suggestions never hurt.


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Anonymous 14/02/13(Thu)15:04 No. 21134 ID: 819a2e

>>21108
It seems very unlikely and unrealistic for this to happen and it sounds like the opposite of what OP would write.


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Anonymous 14/02/16(Sun)15:40 No. 21154 ID: b1ad64

>>21108
This is a very bad idea


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Anonymous 14/02/16(Sun)18:53 No. 21158 ID: e4bde3

Play nice children, just a thought after all. although I do really like anal fingering, but that's just me.



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