>>17319
We love your writing, that is all.

You should have them deal with how some of the girls at Sara's school have 'boyfriends' and how shallow and fragile those relationships are and what this means in light of their own.

>>21085
Pretty good idea this. Might she also get jealous easily since the relationship is a secret?

Whatever happens keep us guessing.

>>21085
>>21094

yeah no, this sounds pretty lame. OP, just keep doing your thing, a bit more of story would be great

>>21102

Couldn't agree more man. Those suggestions sound downright awful.

Sara has to leave for [enter reason] for a couple of days and she asks the protagonist not to masturbate during that time. She wants him to wait for her since they are now boyfriend-girlfriend. She makes him promise. He does. He has a hard time but he successfully manages to not fap.

When she finally comes back, Bill is the one who leaves for 2 days for [enter reason]. The protagonist surprises Sara with the fact that he made a reservation to a fancy restaurant and has a romantic evening planned. She is really happy but then looks a bit worried because she doesn't have a nice dress to wear.

He decides to go shopping with Sara in the afternoon before going to the restaurant. After picking a couple of dresses, she goes to the changing room and he manages to enter her cabin unseen. They make-out. She goes on her knees and starts sucking and gets a good taste of his precum. He is too scared to get caught so he stops before orgasm and leaves the cabin unseen. She picks a very nice dress although it's pricy. He still decides to buy her the dress as a Valentine's present.

When they were leaving the mall, they pass an underwear boutique. She tells him that she wants some.

Afterward, they go back to the apartment and prepare to go to the restaurant. They both take a shower (not together). He shaves his balls and wears a tie. She puts some makeup on, wears the new underwear and the dress. She looks stunning. It really turns on the protagonist.

They drive to the restaurant. They are seated in a secluded area where almost no one can see them. They eat [food] and he drinks wine. They have a nice, almost adult, conversation. They manage to touch themselves a bit under the table.

After the meal, they go see a movie at a drive-in theater. They cuddle. During a sex scene they start making out. She sucks him again and gets another good taste of his precum. They don't go further and he doesn't have an orgasm because they are afraid of getting caught.

They drive home. He brings her in his arms to his room where he lights candles and puts music on. They slowly get undress while making out. He ends up on his back on the bed and she realizes that he doesn't get erect even if she jerks him. He tells her that it might be because of the alcohol, but that there are special ways to make it go hard. He tells her that balls are a very sensitive part of a man, even more so than the penis. She starts massaging his balls with her hand. She procedes to kiss them, then lick them, then suck each of them. Finally, she manages to take his whole ballsack in her mouth and starts sucking and licking with her gentle tougue. During this time he massages her clitoris. He his now fully erect and has precum coming out. She tastes it and alternates between sucking his balls licking his precum.

He then returns the favor and eats her out.

She then gets on all fours. He gets behind her and slides his dick between her ass cheeks. His precum is oozing out and makes it slippery. He then puts his dick between her labia and slides it there without penetration. His precum mixes with some of her juices. She reaches between her legs and holds his dick firmly against her slit. Some precum oozes out and she periodically licks her fingers. He tells her to grab, caress and fondle his balls to get more out. She does and tries to not miss a drop.

Meanwhile, he places his hand on her butt and his thumb on her asshole. He massages her asshole and enters slightly. Her moans are quite audible now.

When he can't hold back any longer, he grabs her head and pulls her closer. She understands whats happening and quickly wraps her lips around his penis. He shoots a lot of cum in her mouth and she manages to swallow every drop. She looks up at him with a grin and licks her lips: she is very happy he kept his promise.

She says: « I love you ».

He says: « I love you too ».

>>21108
this is terrible and shares nothing in common with the rest of the story, as well as not making sense (you don't take a 11-12 year old girl out to dinner). At least you tried. Wait for OP next time.

>>21109

I beg to differ about the dinner comment, assuming you are a hitman named Leon.

>>21108
fuck off

>>21114
No need to be rude fellas. Just a "I don't like the idea" is fine.

I thought that Op actually posted. way to dash my hopes and dreams.

The idea itself, I am not crazy about, but suggestions never hurt.

>>21108
It seems very unlikely and unrealistic for this to happen and it sounds like the opposite of what OP would write.

>>21108
This is a very bad idea

Play nice children, just a thought after all. although I do really like anal fingering, but that's just me.

He wakes up the next morning to find her gingerly stroking his penis. Not even stroking--more like studying; she would lift it turn it, blow on the underside to watch it twitch.

Needless to say, that was somewhat arousing. And by "Somewhat" I mean "So horny that it felt as though, were I to jizz, it would punch through the heavens with enough force to knock out God.

"Morning," he mutters, his voice half-way between a groan of sleep and a grunt of ecstacy.

"Morning, sleepyhead," she says. "I was just..." she blushed before finishing, "studying."

"I see," our humble narrator says as his wits creep back to him. "Wait... your brother--"

"Don't worry about him," she says. "He's not going to disturb us this morning."

Our narrator shutters as warm the breath of her words passes over the slick of precum that covered the purple head of his dick.

"I like this thing," she muses, wrapping a hand around the shaft to listlessly stroke. "Like--a lot."

Our narrator laughs in spite of himself. "I'm quite fond of it, too."

Her eyes lit up when she heard his words. "Seriously?"

Our narrator's laughter trailed off, but his smile remained. "Well, without it, we couldn't do what we do. And I *love* what we do."

She beamed as she popped to her feet, grabbing the hem of her cotton nightie and tearing it over her head with a flourish.

Our humble narrator's smile made the subtle shift to 'shit-eating grin' as he watched the milky white skin of her neck, the curve of her collar bone, the small soft promise of a developing bustline, her slender midriff, her hips showing just a fleck of womanhood, her penis, her legs that were sinewy from her time playing--

wait, wat

Shit-eating becomes nervous as our humble narrator slides his hips back, sitting his body as upright as his penis. "Wait--that's..."

If she picked up on his sudden concern, she didn't show it. "Isn't it awesome?"

"How is that--"

"You like it?"

He glances towards the door. "Uhh.. Bill?"

"I told you, he won't distrub us. Where do you think I found it?"

Our narrator can't help but look back at the protrusion. It looked a little under-developed for her young body--though, by his personality, it should hardly surprise me that my roommate had the dick of an eight-year-old.

"How is this even possible," he stammers.

"How *isn't* this possible?"

"Can I have you back to the way you were?"

She pouted a little. "How could you not like dicks?"

He sputters and stammers for a response, but all he can come up with is, "Adam and Eve, not Adam and Dicks".

Just then, a white light shone upon him, and lo, he heard the voice of God, and through the Word our narrator saw the truth of it. And on the sixth day, God created man, and of his rib God created Eve. And around man and woman he did create dicks. And upon Eve's womanhood God did add a dick. And the dicks were plentiful, and the Dicks were righteous. And God said unto Man, "Lo, I have granted you the gift of Dicks."

The flash gone, our humble narrator realized the folly of his ways. He was blessed, having taught this young woman the divine way of the dick, and the Lord of dicks had blessed her. And he could feel himself be blessed as well, much as Bill was cursed as The Ungrateful, and cast out of Dick Paradise, his dick having been removed.

Our narrator's bewildered gaze returned to where his forbidden lover stood, only to see her body take a transformation much unlike puberty. Her frame widened, her arms melding into the flesh that spun around her torso like a cocoon. It wasn't until the cocoon wound around her neck that he realized what was happening: Her body was becoming a shaft of flesh, and her head was being wrapped in a helmet of flesh.

The narrator muttered--"I don't get it. How are you--"

The giant penis angles slightly downward, somehow kept upright by forces unseen (and by forces, I most likely mean a pair of balls that our narrator couldn't see because of the bed, but it's best not to give it too much thought).

The head of the giant penis levelled itself out at his eye level, its urethral hole drooling a viscous strand of pre-cum. "No, Frank--you *are* the penis."

And then he was a zombie.

The End.

Moral of the story: lol butts


This story made extra realistic for >>21134

>>21162
I just read "and then he was a zombie"

>>21081
The creepy kid(girl)next door has been watching them and gets in the house one day and while they're going at it she joins in with some S&M.

>>21162
Hmm, that name seems familiar. Can't quite remember where from, though...

We be needing regular updates up in this bitch yo

a-am I the only one who wants the MC to penetrate Sara?