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Anonymous 14/04/04(Fri)21:46 No. 21488 ID: 02feac

>>21474

thank you OP, I love you


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Anonymous 14/04/05(Sat)13:51 No. 21491 ID: d94425

What about in here, anyone know where to find the story 'A start'? By Infinity.

And I ask in here because I'm hoping one of the many readers might have it.


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Anonymous 14/04/06(Sun)19:12 No. 21496 ID: a3580c

>>21491
>A start
>Infinity

Don't have the story, just sounds like it might be a bit hard to find the start of infinity.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 14/04/07(Mon)04:52 No. 21499 ID: 61bc43

>>21496

Eh, just pick a random spot on a mobius strip and start from there.

Nearly done with the next chapter, just need to write the last bit, then go back and polish before posting.


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Anonymous 14/04/10(Thu)02:12 No. 21520 ID: 58cb7f

why is this shit not on front page


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Anonymous 14/04/10(Thu)06:10 No. 21524 ID: e588a9

>>21520
Because OP hasn't updated it in months and other stories are getting updated so they push him off the top. Learn your fucking chan etiquette before you start bumping threads that don't have a purpose currently. If you comment something that doesn't contribute to the conversation, you sage.


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Anonymous 14/04/10(Thu)23:12 No. 21530 ID: db1e71

>>21524
I'd say there are enough fans to keep this thing bumped.


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Anonymous 14/04/11(Fri)13:26 No. 21533 ID: 2a0004

>>21530
Indeed.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 14/04/13(Sun)01:40 No. 21538 ID: 61bc43

Day 5,437. I continue to wander the wastelands and lament to myself that the apocalypse has a discouraging lack of lolis.

I'm gonna break this chapter into two parts, simply because I enjoy tormenting you with cliff hangers.

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Thursday came and when I got back from class I was tingling all over in anticipation. I knew what I was doing was wrong, but I was past the point of no return now. I did some exercises to work off my nervous energy, took a cold shower, and waited in my room clad only in my boxers.

Then I spent the next couple hours screwing around on 4chan and Cracked, got sucked into tvtropes yet again, and finally emerged for air. I walked into the kitchen to grab a glass of orange juice and as I was pouring it, I heard the door unlock and looked up just in time for Sara to walk in.

"Hey, kiddo! How was school?"

"Ok, I guess. My classmates suck and the teacher's boring. I'm gonna toss my stuff in my room."

"Okey-dokey."

I chugged my juice, set the glass in the sink without bothering to rinse it, and went into my room and shut the door. My heart was racing and my fingers were tingling again.

Oh, man. Oh man! I was excited, but nervous at the same time. Not about getting caught, we still had a couple hours before Bill was due back, I was nervous that she wouldn't want to do anything naughty with me. I'd already decided to proceed at her own pace and let her come to me, and I was worried she wouldn't want to.

There was a quiet knock on the door.

"It's open!"

Sara came in, grinning, and shut the door behind her. She was wearing only her t-shirt and panties. The ones with the condemning cartoon frogs on them.

Seems I had nothing to worry about after all; she was ready and willing.

She was nervous too, apparently, because she blushed shyly and asked, "Um, did... did you wanna... um..."

I chuckled, tousled her hair while she squawked indignantly, and slid my boxers off. She grinned and quickly pulled off her shirt and panties, standing before me stark naked.

Wow, she was beautiful. Pale skin as smooth and pure as a Renaissance sculpture, swollen pink buds where her breasts would someday be, the smooth cleft of Venus with just the tip of her hood peeking out and the freckle on her left lip... Every time I looked at her, I just wanted to stare forever. I met her gorgeous blue eyes and smiled back at her, then sat on the edge of the bed.

She crouched down in front of me, took my penis into her hand without asking, and began gently stroking, trying to get me hard.

As odd as it sounds, while this was going on, I asked her for more details about her day at school, which she seemed reluctant to provide, and it eventually came out that she had done poorly on a math quiz. Math was never my strong suit, but I offered to help her study and she grinned again and said I was the best friend she'd ever had as she stroked my erect cock.

Somewhere in hell, I have a reservation, probably engraved in stone and waxing poetic about how I willfully corrupted a young girl. At the moment, I didn't care. I had a beautiful, friendly, and eager 11 year old jerking me off.

"You wanna try what we did last time?"

She made a face and blew a raspberry, but after some hesitation she agreed to give me a blowjob again. She seemed reluctant, but I could tell that she did want to try it again.

This time, it was all up to her. I was letting her do things on her own. After a little more waffling, she finally took the head of my penis into her mouth.

"OUCH! Hey, watch the teeth!"

"Sorry! Sorry! I'm so sorry!"

"It's ok, kiddo, you just grazed me. But be careful, it's sensitive, remember?"

She nodded frantically, seemed a little afraid to try again, but eventually put me back in her mouth. I had to guide her at this point, but soon she was slowly bobbing her head up and down on my cock and I was in paradise.

I put one hand on her head and gently stroked her hair as she sucked amateurishly (I wasn't going to complain, since I was just as inexperienced, she was the only one willing to blow me, and it felt fantastic anyway.) and whispered gentle encouragement.

"You're doing good, baby girl. That feels great. Wanna go a little faster now? There you go. That's it. You're doing a good job!"

Ah, there we go! After only a few minutes, I felt that familiar tension in my balls, the tingling in my lower spine...

"Ok sweetie, get ready. Try not to spill it, ok?"

She started to nod, decided that was a bad idea, and just rested her hands on my thighs. I held her head in my hand in case she tried to pull away, but she never moved.

I finished the job by jerking myself with my free hand and within seconds I was in ecstasy, wave after wave of pure paradise accompanying each spurt of semen into Sara's mouth. I finally finished ejaculating and took my hand off her head and she pulled back slowly, my dick flopping out from between her lips. Her cheeks were bulged comically and she seemed unsure what to do next. A little of my jizz was on her lips and dribbling down to her chin.

"Let me see. Open your mouth."

She complied and I decided that the one thing that turned me on more than anything I'd ever seen was a cute 11 year old girl on her knees, naked, with her mouth full of my semen. I nearly achieved another erection just from the sight of it.

"Ok. Go ahead and swallow."

She closed her mouth and swallowed noisily, then made a 'bleagh' sound and wiped her face with the back of her hand.

"Do you not like how it tastes?"

She shook her head and climbed up onto the bed with me.

"No, it doesn't taste bad, it's just... weird. You know?"

She pulled her knees up to her bare chest and brushed her hair out of her face as she looked up at me. I put an arm around her and pulled her to me in a hug.

"Nope, can't say that I do know. I've never tried the stuff myself."

I grinned and she giggled, then we both laid back on the bed together, side by side.

I placed my hand on her smooth, pale belly and gently stroked up and down.

"So you really like doing this sort of thing?"

She nodded, hugging my other arm.

"Think you're ready for a turn now?"

In answer, she spread her legs and I obligingly slid my hand down there.


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Anonymous 14/04/13(Sun)02:17 No. 21539 ID: 4f4e8b

>>21538
Enjoyable, can't wait for part II. Such a tease, splitting it in half like that...


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Anonymous 14/04/14(Mon)08:13 No. 21544 ID: 02feac

>>21538

why OP, why did you split it in two parts!?


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Anonymous 14/04/14(Mon)09:18 No. 21545 ID: 8b52ee

>>21538
You are the most magnificent bastard, I need more!


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Anonymous 14/04/16(Wed)08:17 No. 21554 ID: 142660

>>21538
I don't want to sound like a jerk, but am I the only one getting tired of the "I'm going to hell for this" joke?


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 14/04/17(Thu)07:07 No. 21562 ID: 61bc43

>>21544

I believe I already explained why. :-p


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Anonymous 14/04/17(Thu)17:35 No. 21566 ID: 47a00e

>>21554
It's getting kind of stale, yeah.


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Anonymous 14/04/19(Sat)09:23 No. 21574 ID: db1e71

>>21562


I know why you're doing it, but it was kinda short. Not really long enough to fap to. While I can appreciate building suspense, I'm sad panda for waiting longer for part two of this post. :(

Please, make my weiner happy.


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Anonymous 14/04/19(Sat)20:56 No. 21576 ID: 3551e9

Yeah, feels like it's getting a bit stale. I understand the slow pace and the build up, but this felt like filler. Not a lot of originality, basically a repeat of an earlier chapter in an effort to segway into what I assume will finally be the reciprocation to her. While it's not bad, it's definitely not on par with the rest of the story thus far. And while I understand it was meant to be a "teaser" it came off more as a disappointment. For it to have been a true teaser, I feel like more efforts should have been out in.


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Anonymous 14/04/19(Sat)23:16 No. 21578 ID: 770442

Well, you can't really know that. We have no idea what is in store. Granted, she will more then likely go a little further this time, we have no idea just HOW far that is. Not to mention the whole drops leading to a flood thing that was mentioned earlier in the story. That's just my opinion though, I'm not trying to call anyone an asshole. In any case, I have no problems with the writing, I think it's great OP!!.



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