/elit/ - Erotic Literature

Anonymous 14/04/19(Sat)23:16 No. 21578 ID: 770442

Well, you can't really know that. We have no idea what is in store. Granted, she will more then likely go a little further this time, we have no idea just HOW far that is. Not to mention the whole drops leading to a flood thing that was mentioned earlier in the story. That's just my opinion though, I'm not trying to call anyone an asshole. In any case, I have no problems with the writing, I think it's great OP!!.

Anonymous 14/04/21(Mon)23:13 No. 21588 ID: db1e71

I keep checking back here every day for part two....

Anonymous 14/04/22(Tue)06:00 No. 21590 ID: 02feac

>>21588
same...

Anonymous 14/04/22(Tue)08:47 No. 21591 ID: 1904bf

>>21588
yep....

Anonymous 14/04/22(Tue)08:52 No. 21592 ID: 7ab636

What was the other story he said he was working on?

Anonymous 14/04/22(Tue)19:32 No. 21593 ID: a3580c

Thanks, OP. Don't be discouraged by some of the criticism here, you should focus on whatever is happening in your life. An untroubled OP is a good OP.

Also, don't die. Please.

not+op 14/04/24(Thu)09:28 No. 21600 ID: 23fc02

>>21588
Mmmhmm.

Anonymous 14/04/25(Fri)03:56 No. 21607 ID: 770442

You know what I just realized. This fucker hasn't even KISSED her yet! (on the lips of course.)

Anonymous 14/04/28(Mon)06:23 No. 21636 ID: db1e71

>>21600

So does he have the next part ready and just isn't posting, or... what?

Anonymous 14/04/28(Mon)07:55 No. 21638 ID: c122cf

>>21636
That sums up the situation nicely.

Anonymous 14/04/28(Mon)18:07 No. 21642 ID: e43357

>>21636
>>21638
In other words: Yes.

Anonymous 14/04/28(Mon)20:00 No. 21643 ID: 770442

Honesty, who WOULDN'T get a kick out of making their fans wait? NO ONE, that's who. That is the way that writers work, have worked, and always WILL work.

There was no offence Anonymous 14/04/29(Tue)02:47 No. 21646 ID: 3551e9

I wasn't saying that the story isn't good. I was just offering constructive criticism. Believe it or not that is what makes a good writer. He has had tons of positive feedback and with that he has continued on using things that we have all express positive feedback to. While negative feedback may not be as easy to hear, it is equally as important. Maybe I represent the minority, or maybe there are others that agree. Maybe even OP to some extent and with that information goes in to produce an amazing next chapter.

Anonymous 14/04/30(Wed)08:09 No. 21651 ID: fd2c20

>>21646
I've been a vocal supporter of this story since the first chapter, and I'm with this guy.

Anonymous 14/05/01(Thu)06:47 No. 21668 ID: db1e71

>>21651
I don't think there is any harm in giving constructive criticism. Anyone who is ready to show other people their work needs to be ready to hear ways that they can improve. My big issue is that I'd like so see more, because the last section was very, very short. It's good stuff, but it was barely enough to fap to.

OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 14/05/04(Sun)10:47 No. 21678 ID: 61bc43

Sorry, having to rewrite the second half of this chapter because of how terrible it turned out.

Also, not very motivated to do much of anything lately.

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