/elit/ - Erotic Literature

Anonymous 14/04/25(Fri)03:56 No. 21607 ID: 770442

You know what I just realized. This fucker hasn't even KISSED her yet! (on the lips of course.)

Anonymous 14/04/28(Mon)06:23 No. 21636 ID: db1e71

>>21600

So does he have the next part ready and just isn't posting, or... what?

Anonymous 14/04/28(Mon)07:55 No. 21638 ID: c122cf

>>21636
That sums up the situation nicely.

Anonymous 14/04/28(Mon)18:07 No. 21642 ID: e43357

>>21636
>>21638
In other words: Yes.

Anonymous 14/04/28(Mon)20:00 No. 21643 ID: 770442

Honesty, who WOULDN'T get a kick out of making their fans wait? NO ONE, that's who. That is the way that writers work, have worked, and always WILL work.

There was no offence Anonymous 14/04/29(Tue)02:47 No. 21646 ID: 3551e9

I wasn't saying that the story isn't good. I was just offering constructive criticism. Believe it or not that is what makes a good writer. He has had tons of positive feedback and with that he has continued on using things that we have all express positive feedback to. While negative feedback may not be as easy to hear, it is equally as important. Maybe I represent the minority, or maybe there are others that agree. Maybe even OP to some extent and with that information goes in to produce an amazing next chapter.

Anonymous 14/04/30(Wed)08:09 No. 21651 ID: fd2c20

>>21646
I've been a vocal supporter of this story since the first chapter, and I'm with this guy.

Anonymous 14/05/01(Thu)06:47 No. 21668 ID: db1e71

>>21651
I don't think there is any harm in giving constructive criticism. Anyone who is ready to show other people their work needs to be ready to hear ways that they can improve. My big issue is that I'd like so see more, because the last section was very, very short. It's good stuff, but it was barely enough to fap to.

OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 14/05/04(Sun)10:47 No. 21678 ID: 61bc43

Sorry, having to rewrite the second half of this chapter because of how terrible it turned out.

Also, not very motivated to do much of anything lately.

Anonymous 14/05/04(Sun)11:16 No. 21679 ID: 53b0af

>>21678
op pls

Anonymous 14/05/05(Mon)04:17 No. 21688 ID: b2dfb2

>>21678

we all understand nuclear winter is rough, OP, but you're busting our balls here

Anonymous 14/05/05(Mon)18:30 No. 21690 ID: 770442

Technically, we are bustin HIS balls about not writing.

Anonymous 14/05/06(Tue)06:05 No. 21699 ID: 0b6a74

anyday now

Anonymous 14/05/08(Thu)05:43 No. 21702 ID: db1e71

>>21699
Give him some time. He was at least nice enough to post here, and tell us that he's working on a revision.

Personally, I'm happy for that. I felt the last part of the story was a bit too short, and felt slightly rushed, (despite the wait). I think that this is a pivotal point in the story, and it deserves the attention that the author is willing to put in it.

Don't get me wrong, I'm just as eager to read the next post as everyone else. But I think we should be a little more supportive.

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