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Just started reading your story OP and it took me about 7 hours to read it...not sure if its cause I suck at english/reading or the excitement(then running around the room, shouting and making odd noises, followed by masturbating) delayed me most of that time, tho i think its a little of both...so good job on keeping me awake, you have given me reason to not leave my computer, and for that, I thank-you.
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, SOMEONE GET OP A LOLI!!! Maybe it will help inspire something...