>>23755

LifeLessons - Fits the story more

Cryptic Apocalyptic - Fits the apocalyptic wasteland author notes more. This one sounds great though, like a movie title.

Glad you're back, OP. Now, as to names...

I suggest DieForLolis to commemorate OP's trauma.

I look foward for a kiss. Sure, he got blowjob, handjob but now they're bf and gf, there is this feeling this is becoming lovely.

So is this shit still going on, or what?

Also, great stuff, OP. Nobody IRL will ever give you credit, but this is genuinely well written. I wouldn't even call it pornography. You're an unsung hero.

>>23748
godspeed, sir. you got this.

Loved the Brothers in Arms reference from the October bit. (All references are good actually)

What I do enjoy about this story so far is that its more real than most stories based around this (I think so anyways).
For example, the whole part when he came and she thought it gross or the parts with her getting scared when he started rubbing her and such. It seems like a real thing, using her cluelessness/naiveness and such. But, the story being realistic, I am kinda expect a realistic outcome/ending.

I know when he was thinking "Oh shit, I gotta make sure she doesn't tell anyone- etc, etc" I was thinking how you were lay it out in the story and that it may be a bit difficult BUT THEN you make her coming out of the washroom saying that she wants to keep it a secrete.
So I thought that that was a good save.

You didn't put in a whole >>21108 type of deal (What the fuck was up the whole madlibs-loli story?)which is great.

There errors here and there, but that doesn't really matter (typos and such).

I'm getting a feeling that this will end badly (kind of like I said previously).
And I'm enjoying this story and hope to see more!

OP Plz

WE WANT MORE!

OP could be Mint alt?

>>23859

FUCKING NO. Look at our IDs.