>>24533

No no, I was referring to a comment the protagonist made much earlier in the story. When he was still terrified of getting caught and ending up in jail, who would then get to meet Bubba, so to speak. Of course I hope for your outcome, but... yeah.

>>24533
Aint nothing nice about bubba going in the back way.

This needs a bump back to page one.

Also would love to see Sara get knocked up at the end of this

>>24625
>knocked up
She's eleven. She's still flat-chested, and it's all but outright stated that she hasn't had her first period yet, either.

Unless the author's going to do a timeskip of several years, getting Sara pregnant would be unrealistic and generally a bad idea.

>>24625

"Hey, my 11 year old sister is suddenly pregnant and you're the only dude around. You, uh, wouldn't know anything about it, would you?"

*protagonist dives through a window, suffering severe lacerations in the process, rolls to his feet, and takes off running for the countryside*

".... that didn't answer my question."

No no no . No time travel. You add time travel and this whole god-damed so perfect of a story becomes the book " The Door Into Summer" by Robert A. Heinlein. Granted I love his work in sci-if but roommates is so much More than that!

>>24631
is this canon now? xD