>>24533
Aint nothing nice about bubba going in the back way.

This needs a bump back to page one.

Also would love to see Sara get knocked up at the end of this

>>24625
>knocked up
She's eleven. She's still flat-chested, and it's all but outright stated that she hasn't had her first period yet, either.

Unless the author's going to do a timeskip of several years, getting Sara pregnant would be unrealistic and generally a bad idea.

>>24625

"Hey, my 11 year old sister is suddenly pregnant and you're the only dude around. You, uh, wouldn't know anything about it, would you?"

*protagonist dives through a window, suffering severe lacerations in the process, rolls to his feet, and takes off running for the countryside*

".... that didn't answer my question."

No no no . No time travel. You add time travel and this whole god-damed so perfect of a story becomes the book " The Door Into Summer" by Robert A. Heinlein. Granted I love his work in sci-if but roommates is so much More than that!

>>24631
is this canon now? xD

We need more content in this thread!

>>24632

>confused feelings when someone compares your story about a college student molesting a prepubescent girl to Robert Heinlein, one of the most inspirational sci-fi authors of all time

On the one hand, it's flattering as hell. On the other hand, Heinlein was into some weird shit. Time Enough For Love was too much for me. Like, fucking your own opposite-gender underage clone? Going back in time and fucking your mother while she's pregnant with you? Nope! The farthest I'll go is a dude jizzing in a little girl's mouth, that's far enough for me, thanks.

>>24635

I'm working on it. I mostly write new chapters when I'm bored/feel the urge, so I gotta be in the right mood. Also, people are complaining that it's repetitive, which unfortunately is a necessary evil at this stage. I bet that by the time they're having sex on a regular basis, people will be complaining that, "ho hum, they're having sex again, so repetitive". Kinda kills my motivation to write, especially if most of the sexual activity going on in the immediate future consists of blowjobs and such before they move on to the next stage in their relationship.

>>24641

I mean, when you were in high school, did you complain about how 'repetitive' it was if your girlfriend sucked your dick twice a week? Hell no, you came and you asked for another.

So if you're whacking off to this story like most people, what the hell are you complaining about? Sex scenes are sex scenes, they're not necessarily where most of the character and story development come from.