/elit/ - Erotic Literature

Anonymous 16/09/18(Sun)21:50 No. 24680 ID: 5a335c

>>24653

This, dear OP, http://oglaf.com/blank-page/
comes to mind...

styxarcher 16/10/04(Tue)07:58 No. 24701 ID: 3c8285

>>24399
OPPPPPPPPP

We need you! Come back to us.

Anonymous 16/10/08(Sat)09:23 No. 24707 ID: 2b3fc6

Please come back to us OP

OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/10/24(Mon)10:01 No. 24769 ID: 60e3b1

>>24701

Still alive, trying to get myself in the mood to write.

So do we want the story to move faster, or keep the same pace? This is as much about developing their relationship as it is about fap material.

Anonymous 16/10/24(Mon)17:25 No. 24770 ID: 454e92

>>24769

fasterrrrrr, but not too fast either of course. There's been plenty of oral now, it's time to slowly move into some penetration.
Praise be upon you.

Anonymous 16/10/25(Tue)19:04 No. 24778 ID: 63cef9

>>24769
As far as their physical intimacy, I don't think it needs to progress any "faster." Some complications or explorations might be fun, such as a close-call with Bill almost discovering their secret, or learning about something new that Sara likes (sexually, or not). Ultimately, it is their relationship and circumstances that really make the story special.

I don't think most readers want you to "rush to the finish". I think we just wish you'd post more often!

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