>>24701

Still alive, trying to get myself in the mood to write.

So do we want the story to move faster, or keep the same pace? This is as much about developing their relationship as it is about fap material.

>>24769

fasterrrrrr, but not too fast either of course. There's been plenty of oral now, it's time to slowly move into some penetration.
Praise be upon you.

>>24769
As far as their physical intimacy, I don't think it needs to progress any "faster." Some complications or explorations might be fun, such as a close-call with Bill almost discovering their secret, or learning about something new that Sara likes (sexually, or not). Ultimately, it is their relationship and circumstances that really make the story special.

I don't think most readers want you to "rush to the finish". I think we just wish you'd post more often!

>>24769

I like the current pace I just wish there were more updates. I think we all understand you're busy with the apocalypse and all though.

Still waiting around. God, I wish a new fucking update would happen.

>>24769
I think we need to speed things up a little. The actual sex needs to end up happening after four years, don't you think? Or, you know, maybe he could give her some oral? Mix things up a little? Just my ideas. Hope to see an update at some point soon, OP!

>>24769
Faster then now, but not to fast.

>>24786

Ok, I'll speed up the pace of the story a little.

But not too much; after a certain point, the story will go much faster and I don't want it to be TOO rushed.

I've outlined the next chapter, just have to get in the writing mood to flesh it out and post it.

>>24790
hey op, how old would sara be now???

>>24796

Pretty sure, as of the last part, Sara is still explicitly described as 11. I don't think there have been any significant time skips at this point.

>>24797

Correct. So far, less than a year has passed; the main character has gone through the first semester of his freshman year and is currently in spring break of his second semester.

Working on the new chapter now. Don't wait up.

http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/and-then-they-fucked-yelling-bird

It doesn't have to leap into the territory the link goes, merely the slippery slope should escalate a touch.

She's been dry humped a bit previous, and just prior the "roast-beef DJ".

Maybe a single finger for her to ride? Gradually working her way up to two, and then maybe... just maybe...

well since trump won i feel we deserve to see sara get fucked hard to prepare her for the real world.

>>24811
Yeah, keep your horrible ideas to yourself buddy.

OP, please just stick to what you already had in mind. This is easily the best loli story on elit, and it'd be horrible if this would get ruined because of politics, Trump hysteria, or other kinds of bullshit.

>>24811
Can we instead get a story about trump ass fucking you?

>>24811

I voted for Trump.

*watches anon's head explode*

What? Did you think I was posting from a post-apocalyptic future as a joke?

New chapter nearly done; some might get a little pissy because of how it speeds up the story, others might appreciate it. We'll see how it goes.