>>24701

Still alive, trying to get myself in the mood to write.

So do we want the story to move faster, or keep the same pace? This is as much about developing their relationship as it is about fap material.

>>24769

fasterrrrrr, but not too fast either of course. There's been plenty of oral now, it's time to slowly move into some penetration.
Praise be upon you.

>>24769
As far as their physical intimacy, I don't think it needs to progress any "faster." Some complications or explorations might be fun, such as a close-call with Bill almost discovering their secret, or learning about something new that Sara likes (sexually, or not). Ultimately, it is their relationship and circumstances that really make the story special.

I don't think most readers want you to "rush to the finish". I think we just wish you'd post more often!

>>24769

I like the current pace I just wish there were more updates. I think we all understand you're busy with the apocalypse and all though.

Still waiting around. God, I wish a new fucking update would happen.

>>24769
I think we need to speed things up a little. The actual sex needs to end up happening after four years, don't you think? Or, you know, maybe he could give her some oral? Mix things up a little? Just my ideas. Hope to see an update at some point soon, OP!

>>24769
Faster then now, but not to fast.

>>24786

Ok, I'll speed up the pace of the story a little.

But not too much; after a certain point, the story will go much faster and I don't want it to be TOO rushed.

I've outlined the next chapter, just have to get in the writing mood to flesh it out and post it.

>>24790
hey op, how old would sara be now???

>>24796

Pretty sure, as of the last part, Sara is still explicitly described as 11. I don't think there have been any significant time skips at this point.

>>24797

Correct. So far, less than a year has passed; the main character has gone through the first semester of his freshman year and is currently in spring break of his second semester.

Working on the new chapter now. Don't wait up.

http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/and-then-they-fucked-yelling-bird

It doesn't have to leap into the territory the link goes, merely the slippery slope should escalate a touch.

She's been dry humped a bit previous, and just prior the "roast-beef DJ".

Maybe a single finger for her to ride? Gradually working her way up to two, and then maybe... just maybe...

well since trump won i feel we deserve to see sara get fucked hard to prepare her for the real world.

>>24811
Yeah, keep your horrible ideas to yourself buddy.

OP, please just stick to what you already had in mind. This is easily the best loli story on elit, and it'd be horrible if this would get ruined because of politics, Trump hysteria, or other kinds of bullshit.

>>24811
Can we instead get a story about trump ass fucking you?

>>24811

I voted for Trump.

*watches anon's head explode*

What? Did you think I was posting from a post-apocalyptic future as a joke?

New chapter nearly done; some might get a little pissy because of how it speeds up the story, others might appreciate it. We'll see how it goes.

>>24817

Anon slammed the door to his apartment and fumed. Trump won the election?! How?! The Democrats had been so careful to constantly attack, belittle, and marginalize the majority of Americans, their victory had been all but assured!

He was just about to head to the kitchen for a snack when he heard a footstep behind him. Whirling around in surprise, he was shocked to see Donald Trump standing in his apartment, pointing a gold-plated Desert Eagle right at him.

"H-how did you get in here?!"

"I bought your apartment building. Since I now own it, I can enter any apartment I want, whenever I want, for an inspection. To make sure you're complying with the tenant rules."

Trump shakes his head in disappointment and points at the litter box in the corner of the living room.

"You've been a bad boy. You know pets aren't allowed; that was a condition of your lease."

"I'll get rid of the cat! I was just keeping it for a friend, honest! I swear!"

Gesturing with the gun, Trump forced Anon to walk into the bedroom.

"As per the new conditions of your lease, the penalty for violating the rules has increased. I'm gonna make these apartments great again, but to do that I'm gonna have to crack down on violators. Get on the bed."

Kneeling on the bed, Anon looked over his shoulder as Trump unbuckled the pants on his $5,000 suit.

"W-what are you gonna do to me?!"

"I'm gonna fuck you in the ass, and you're gonna pay for it. Your lease is going up $100 a month."

"W-wait, you're not serious! A-are you?"

Trump positioned himself behind Anon and replied, "Bite the pillow, I'm going in dry. Oh, and just to warn you..."

Trump leaned in and whispered into Anon's ear.

"It's gonna be yuge."

Anon spent the next six weeks ranting on his blog about how much his ass hurt, but nobody cared because America was great again.

The End

>>24820
I... I am speechless, humored, and honored that you did my request.

Thank you OP.