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Anonymous 17/10/22(Sun)22:49 No. 25170 ID: 2e0c2e

>>25168
OP...OP never delivers... What? I don't... The world does not make sense anymore, the fabric of space time has fractures. OP DELIVERED!


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Anonymous 17/10/23(Mon)04:39 No. 25171 ID: 9d56f7

op delivered so damn much, great story op. you caught a lot of the feelings i had losing my virginity to my gf and put it into words. only difference was she was 2yrs older than me


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/10/24(Tue)05:38 No. 25174 ID: f0592e

5 years, 12 days. Was it worth it?


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Anonymous 17/10/24(Tue)06:49 No. 25175 ID: 9d56f7

>>25174
yes, but the question must be asked. whens the next chapter???


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Anonymous 17/10/25(Wed)23:17 No. 25177 ID: 6d0371

>>25174

You're amazing OP, I just finished it.

It was beautiful. Definitely one of my TOP 10 moments. With the whole story together and this kind of finish; it was real.

And thank you that you kept the story going for more than 5 years. I don't know if it was easy/hard at times, but know that it was worth it.

Hope there are more chapters in the future.

Thanks again <3


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/10/26(Thu)03:26 No. 25178 ID: 2cad3d

>>25177

The story is far from over. I was merely asking if the wait was worth it for the 'payoff' of the main character having sex with Sara.


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Anonymous 17/10/26(Thu)03:48 No. 25179 ID: 2e0c2e

>>25178
In short Yes.

In long yyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssss.


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Anonymous 17/11/02(Thu)05:59 No. 25184 ID: ff168d

>>25174
My reaction to reading this chapter

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=usfiAsWR4qU


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Anonymous 17/11/06(Mon)02:25 No. 25186 ID: 80f54d

HELL. YES!!!


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Anonymous 17/11/07(Tue)05:29 No. 25187 ID: dbcb84

>>25174
This is a really good story, I hope it has a relatively happy ending for the subject matter


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Anonymous 17/11/07(Tue)22:09 No. 25188 ID: 07f23c

>>25174
>that feel when you've been following one of the most amazing stories /elit/ for half a decade, getting cockteased and blueballed by it so many times, and you can't actually fap to the story's first true proper sex scene because you're on meds that have gutted your libido.

But it was worth it, OP. It was so very worth it.


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Anonymous 17/11/13(Mon)00:46 No. 25192 ID: 1195e0

>>25174
Holy shit what a journey... I have so many memories of this story. You are a god


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Anonymous 17/11/13(Mon)01:42 No. 25193 ID: 0c2267

hOLY FUCk our savior has returned thank OP

i'm gunna compile all the parts into one txt and post it later so everyone can just read the whole thing instead of scrolling through tons of posts

jesus christ it's been a long time

what a hell of a ride


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/11/13(Mon)04:50 No. 25194 ID: 02664c

>>25193

Next chapter will probably be around Christmas or New Year's.


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Anonymous 17/11/23(Thu)20:01 No. 25197 ID: 276187

I really hope we get to see her orgasm during penetration sex sooner rather than later, preferably a simultaneous climax


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Anonymous 17/11/24(Fri)02:29 No. 25198 ID: cc8911

Keep making her swallow cum loads.
Great work!


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Kryters 17/11/25(Sat)14:22 No. 25199 ID: 80d347

I actually thought was pretty lame, after making us wait so long. A pointless poking in the bedroom ? I was expecting a romantic drawn out hard shagging in the tent at the hunting preserve with wolves howling in the distance as she screamed your name, the full moon silhouetted her nubile body.


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Anonymous 17/12/01(Fri)14:45 No. 25208 ID: db85e4

I think the flow seemed natural enough, It's more believable story my only issues might be in flushing out the brother's character a bit more, we know he is self absorb and cold, at first I thought he had been abusing his sister then I thought he was distant, it seems odd he never talks about girls or sex or dating in the span of an entire year.


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Anonymous 17/12/02(Sat)22:45 No. 25209 ID: 6d0371

I just appreciate the fact he finished inside of her. That's really what made it for me.

Hopefully she will enjoy it more in the future, but the fact it wasn't perfect this time is what makes this story so real.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/12/13(Wed)08:00 No. 25225 ID: 6683c5

The next morning I stumbled out in my boxers, poured a bowl of cereal, and sat at the table, waiting for my brain to wake up. Maybe I should start drinking coffee.

Sara wandered in, hair sticking in all directions, night shirt sagging off one shoulder and wearing the cartoon frog panties from yesterday and I suddenly didn't need any caffeine to wake up.

"Mornin' kiddo."

"Mornin'."

I poured her a bowl of cereal and she flopped into her chair and started crunching away, staring into the void at That Which Man Was Not Meant To Know, located roughly in the center of the table. She was definitely not a morning person.

"How you feel?"

"Sore."

"Sore?"

"Yeah. Like... there's a bruise in my privates."

There actually probably was, given that it was her first time and all. And I'd certainly stretched her out a bit.

"It'll get better. You want a Tylenol?"

"No, it's not that bad."

We finished our breakfast and I put our bowls in the sink, then said, "Since we're both skipping school today, you wanna watch a movie?"

"Sure."

We migrated to the couch and I let her pick out a movie. She selected one from Bill's stack of DVD's and I raised my eyebrow; Dr. Strangelove didn't seem like the sort of movie a 12 year old girl would be into. For that matter, I didn't know if it was something I'd be into either.

Turns out, we both liked it. In fact, for the rest of the semester, either of us could crack the other up by shouting, "MEIN FUHRER! I CAN WALK!"

Sara didn't get all the jokes, and we were both somewhat distracted. She sat in my lap during the movie, and before long my hand had mysteriously found its way between her legs and was gently stroking her through her panties. After a bit, she shifted her position on my lap and sat Indian-style, crotch exposed, so I slid my hand into her panties and fondled her crotch directly.

We just sat like that for the rest of the movie, both of us laughing, her face slightly flushed as I slowly, gently rubbed her slit the entire time.

After the last nuclear bomb exploded and the credits ended, Sara suddenly spun around in my lap (trapping my hand in between her legs) and pounced on me with a loud, "RAAAAR!"

We hadn't wrestled in a long time. It was fun just... having fun. After a couple minutes of tussling about, I suddenly flipped her shirt over her head, blinding her and trapping her arms as I pinned her to the couch. Then I pressed my lips to her belly button and blew.

"PPPPPPBBBBBLLLLLLTTTT!"

"Aaaaah! Hahaha! Stoooop!"

"Never! Pppbbbbllllt!"

Then I took advantage of the opportunity afforded me and put my mouth over one of her little boobs. The whole thing would just fit inside if I opened my mouth... I blew against her puffy nipple and when that only resulted in a burbly noise, I shook my head back and forth and blew a raspberry.

"AAAAAAACK! NOOOOO!"

Sara squirmed her way out of my grasp, wiggling out of her shirt in the process, and stood, legs spread, slightly crouched, ready to dodge in any direction. She was clad in just her panties now, face flushed, breathing heavily, a grin on her face. I lunged for her and she scooted under my swinging arm, bounced off the couch, and jumped on my back.

"Gotcha!"

"Oh no!"

I flopped backwards onto the couch, careful to land on my butt first and then roll onto my back so I didn't squash her, and she shrieked, letting go in an attempt to escape. I rolled around to face her, grabbed her panties, and yanked them off as I stood up, launching her butt and legs in the air as I did so.

She landed flat on the couch with an indignant squawk, then shrieked as I tossed her panties in her face and started tickling her all over.

"N-n-ooo-ooo! Aaaaah! Stop!"

I kept tickling her until she couldn't breath anymore, then I relented and flopped onto the couch next to her. She sprawled beside me, stretching one leg across my stomach, and gasped for breath, still grinning.

"I think I won, kiddo."

"Nuh-uh!"

"Yeah huh."

"... Ok. You win."

"Ha. Told you."

I looked at her beautiful, naked body and gently rubbed my hand up and down the leg she had on top of me, feeling my erection grow inside my boxers.

"So... whatcha wanna do today, kiddo?"

"Let's spend the whole day naked."

"Now that's a plan!"

I slid out of my boxers and she sat up next to me, taking note of my growing boner.

"You wanna try sex again?"

"Uh-uh," she said, shaking her head. She subconsciously covered her crotch with one hand and winced slightly.

"Ok. You want some girl vitamins?"

She pretended to think about it for a second, then nodded cheerfully. I leaned against the corner of the couch and she laid down across the rest of it, on her belly. Her legs slowly alternated back and forth in the air above her butt and she held herself up on her elbows as as she took my penis into her mouth and began sucking.

I really am a lucky bastard, I thought to myself. I didn't even feel a twinge of guilt for corrupting this sweet, innocent girl either. Not anymore. She was all mine, and I was all hers.

I gently stroked her hair as her head bobbed up and down in my lap, and happily reflected that it was only Friday morning and Bill wouldn't be back until late Sunday evening. I had the better part of three days to do all sorts of naughty things with his little sister.

What would he do if he found out...

Sara cleared her throat and pulled my dick out of her mouth while she stretched her neck, then resumed sucking, and I forgot all about any concern for Bill finding out I was fucking his sister. It's hard to think about anything when a pretty 12 year old has her lips wrapped around your cock.

I continued gently stroking her hair as my balls tensed up and then shot my load into her mouth. She waited until I finished, then swallowed and carefully sucked me clean before sitting up and cuddling against me.

"You like the way that tastes, kiddo?"

"Uh-huh. It doesn't taste weird anymore. I like it."

"Well that's good. I like giving you your vitamins."

She giggled and hugged me, and I squeezed her back.

"Betcha I can kick your butt in Mario Kart!"

"Oh, you do, huh? You're on!"

Yeah. This was going to be a great weekend.


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Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)01:12 No. 25238 ID: 0deb37

Wow, a week after a new post and still no replies?! What's going on?


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The+Bard 17/12/20(Wed)01:48 No. 25239 ID: 67e40d

>>25238
It's family invasion holiday portion of the year. That is my guess.


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Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)03:30 No. 25240 ID: c47e15

>>25238

People check on this less often now


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Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)04:23 No. 25241 ID: 73d817

>>25225
Keep on going bro, you still got rapt attention here


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/12/22(Fri)03:58 No. 25246 ID: c15c05

>>25241

Next update will be between Christmas and New Year's. Look forward to it.


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The+Bard 17/12/23(Sat)03:25 No. 25248 ID: 69067c

>>25246
Oh, I very much do. I can't stop reading this story.


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Anonymous 17/12/31(Sun)13:39 No. 25267 ID: 0cf92e

>>25246
STRAYA HERE
YOU GOT 14 MINUTES TO POST AN UPDATE OR YOU'RE A NIGGER


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Anonymous 17/12/31(Sun)21:30 No. 25268 ID: d0c7fc

This story made me get into working out tbh


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Anonymous 18/01/02(Tue)00:08 No. 25270 ID: ff5142

>>25267
He is a nigger



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